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Hey Shear!!!

When you have the time please :D

- work.php?id=96361
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Title: A Hero's Day Off
Genre: Narrative Poetry/ Satire
Link: work.php?id=96490

Whenever you're caught up and have a spare moment <3
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Hi Shearwater,

Sorry to just add to the pile, but you said to let you know when my story continued. So here is the latest chapter:
work.php?id=96478
work.php?id=96479

From the looks of your thread you're gonna be pretty busy for a while!
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Hi there!
I was wondering if you could review one of my poems?
Title: shh...Listen
Genre: Other
Link: work.php?id=96182
Hope you like it :D

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work.php?id=96777 The crash- short story- general. Thankyou so much!




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I would just like to thank you for the great review! It was informative that held suggestions and appreciations in my work. I wanted to let you know I really appreciated it.
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*Shameful bump*

Free to review! =]
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Can I ask for a review? Pretty please? I hope its not too much...
Chapter 1- work.php?id=98795
Chapter 2- work.php?id=98879

Thanks!




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Done. Thank you. :]
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Hey Shears!

Please be vitriolic.

Title: Clockwork Hearts
Genre: Uh...steampunk? Kinda?
Link: work.php?id=98920
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Hey, pink, Coco here! It's been a while, huh? *wonders if you still remember me*

Anyway, I'd love a review of a new novel I'm working on. I need to know if it's going to be worth writing more chapters on.

Take as long as you need :D

Title: Dark Lies
Genre: Mystery/suspense
Link: work.php?id=98967
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Done with both! Thanks for the delicious meals, guys. ;)
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Hey Shearwater! How are you?
Wanna check my short story?
Thanks!

work.php?id=98971

work.php?id=98971




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Could you please review my poem The Court of Flame?

work.php?id=99042
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If you'd take a look at this, I'd be much obliged! It's just a short intro thing I did for Creative Writing work.php?id=99054 Thanks a million! :)
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