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Hello!

If you have the time, I'd love some harsh shredding on this. ^_^
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Twit-done!

Happy to take another request. ^^
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hi
i would love it if you would review my latest poem
[url]Boulevard of life[/url]
thank you! :)
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Manisha- Finished.

Giving this thread a little push since I'm now available and active.
Send me your requests! :)
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Can you please review this?
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=93449
Thank you!
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
And I just can't hide
I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
Inside

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UpAndOut15-Done!

Thank you for the request. :)
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work.php?id=93230
short story, general fiction. Thanks!
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

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Jas-Done!

Thanks for the request!
Hope the review helped.
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Then I'll take the advantage of your done status and request as well =)

It's a first chapter from the Action/Adventure genre, but be warned, it doesn't start all light.
Link : http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=93534

My thanks,
~Kyou
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Thank you so much for posting here, Shear!! It's really awesome of you to do all these reviews!! <3

Could you look at work.php?id=93532 please? It's for an Original Character Tournament on another site. An OCT is like competitive Storybooking, but for comic artists, as well....

unfortunately, because I've been drawing comics so much, my writing has really taken a downturn. :/ I need all the help I can get, haha!!

Thanks! <3
Where are we going?




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Shinda-Done!
Volant- Done!

Thanks guys, for the requests. :3
Hope I helped. ^^
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I wrote a first chapter to a novel recently titled Redemption - Chapter 1. If you could review it, that would be most appreciated. The chapter is intended to be incredibly short, I debated on whether to call it a prologue or chapter 1, but I hate prologues, so I just called it chapter 1.

The two genres are Romance (which you said you do), and mystery / suspense.

Thanks,
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Natural Militia - Done!

Sorry for being late. Hopefully my review helps. ^^
Keep throwing me those reviews, people!
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Daddy dear! <3

Although I've asked for a review, but I thought let's feed the elephant. xD!

Here, please review. work.php?id=94313
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Hello! I really love the reviews you write and I was wondering if you wouldn't mind reading over my short fiction story Motion in a Minute? Thanks so much and I will return the favor!

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