Hello! Wonderfully delicate piece! I enjoyed how each phrase expanded the picture, it corresponded well with the theme of aging, or the sadness that comes with it. The only critique I have are with the last two lines. I am a bit confused on your relationship to the woman in the you are describing. Overall, a well-written piece. Keep going, I look forward to reading more of your work.
Tory
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