They there!
Sorry for taking almost an entire year to get to this. I was rather busy with some stuff. Anyway, here is your review, as requested!
Firstly, I'm going to agree with Rydia here on some of her mentions - though I fail at poetry so I have no idea really what an abab is, what she mentioned about sonnets vs old English vs Modern English is interesting and you could play around with that idea. Experimentation is always a good way to go if you're not sure on which outcome you like better.
This is an interesting idea - and I understand that the cloaked man was death himself and this is told from death's perspective, yes? Referring to the man in third person - alright that much is deduced along with the fact this merry old drunk man died because he walked a dangerous path at night and was attacked by bandits? I think so - that's what I got but I'm never really good at picking apart poetry, there is usually five hundred different meanings behind each stanza, it's riveting.
Basically, it's a good easy poem to pick out and understand though the message you send overall is one that's given out all the time. There's nothing really different about telling the readers that all good things come to and end and not to walk home drunk on darkened paths.
In any case, death is a cliche topic but you did well with what you did and I did enjoy reading this. One thing I do want to point out though is the mention of the 'reap what he sowed'. I don't understand what the man sowed exactly, there was no mention of his man being so horrendous that he would have to greet death with open arms. So there's that...
Overall, I liked this. I thought you did good and if you have any questions or want to tell me about my terrible abilities of reviewing poetry, don't hesitate to say.
All the best,
-Pink
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