The Critic

Hello I am the critic. I shall review your stuff if you leave what it is called. I will give you an honest revew and so on. I will not be cruel though- so do not worry.





Once and a while I may ask for you to review something of mine as well, but don't worry that is not why I am here. ^_^

Hey! I'm always open for suggestions on my romance short story! Don't worry - the parts aren't long at all!

I Think I'm in Love #1

I Think I'm in Love #2

I Think I'm in Love #3

I Think I'm in Love #4

Don't worry, it's perfectly fine if you get bored of them. But a lot of girls have said that they've liked it... so... yeah. Thanks for whatever you can do!

-Jared

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please and thank you? ^.^
I'll be happy to crit anything of yours, as well.

I'm going to move this to the lounge. ^_^

I'd just like you to review my latest novel Gay is My Ex. Pea and Carrots (Please and Thank You)!

Fantasy
DoaV Prologue Part 1: topic26581.html
DoaV Prologue Part 2: topic26947.html

Romance
Kidnapped C1: topic27112.html
Kidnapped C2: topic27180.html

Random, good fun
Hollow Lake 1: topic25246.html
Hollow Lake 2: topic25339.html

I'm not asking you to review all 3 of these stories. That's a lot of mooching. =P Just do whatever you have time for/feel like doing. I know some people don't like reviewing certain genres, so there's a selection. ^_^

Thanks a bundle!

^_^ Keek!

Awesome! There seems to be a lot of these threads kicking around.
... not that I object, though -- I love shameless advertising. =P

> Alphess: part one
> Prologue

Either one of those is fine. ^.^
Thanks!

- Camille xx
PS. If you want a crit in return, post on my 'Want a Critique?' thread.

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Much obliged if you'd crit my poem. Maybe you'd be able to guess what it's about.

:3

Glass Eyes

Can you pretty please review this? Just so you know this was a sudden impulse song. And Isaac Slade is The Fray's lead singer. They say they're not a Christian band but...

Here you go. Tear er' apart!
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Hi! I was hoping you could review this for me :3
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Title : Weavers Ch 3
Genre: Fantasy
Summary: Emily comes from a family of assassins gifted with magic.She herself doesn't much like that thought of murder and is determined to somehow spare her four year sister, Katie, from the same fate.

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