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Silence signed in the vehicle
Even wrapped up in sheets, which I was, the confusion in the getaway driver's voice was obvious.
dropped me roughly on what I could only assume was a pile of out stuff.
Distantly, I think I heard heard the shrill scream of a fire detector going off.
I’d never appreciated how loud that alarm was.
the driver seemed to have noticed the same thing I was appreciating, and the car squealed as it tore away
I wondered if they’d taken my dad’s company laptop, though it seemed irrelevant now. I tried to think, but all I could do was tell myself I was dreaming. People don’t don’t get kidnapped in the middle of the night, not in real life. Right?
would be found out and have the police on their tail, or they’d get away. Somehow, I suspected their hopes weren’t exactly the same as mine on this point. Had there not been a gag in my mouth, I might have told them what I hoped would happen to them.
We figured if you ransom the girl it’ll make up for it.
chuckles died and a stunned silence settled in the car—or maybe it was a van. I assumed that with that many people in it and all of our valuables
stopped and my blood ran cold. Kill me?
building up inside me was sending my heart hammering in my chest.
I suddenly wanted to cry.
So what do you suggest we do then?
She hasn’t seen our faces…” suggested the timid one.
Its proximity startled me, making me jump in my skin.
I assumed he must have nodded or shrugged.
next state as soon as we get rid of all this crap.
would live to appreciate how boring my life had been.
"Just drive!" growled the one who'd threatened me with the knife. Distantly, heard the shrill scream of a fire detector going off. The neighbors would be awake any second—I’d never appreciated how loud that alarm was before.
People didn’t get kidnapped in the middle of the night, not in real life. Right?
It was quiet for a while. If the movies were right, this was the moment of truth.
Somehow, I suspected their hopes weren’t exactly the same as mine on this point. I might have told them what I hoped would happen to them; but with a gag in my mouth I figured it would be a waste of time. That, or they’d understand what I said and get angry.
They drove without stopping for quite a while before anyone said anything.
“What’s in the sheets?’ the driver asked—at least I assumed it was the driver, which, counting the four that had broke into my house, brought the count up criminals up to five.
“A girl,” said the one with the knife. I could still see the blade dancing in my mind’s eye, reminding me to behave.
“And have them hunt you down for murder? Idiot!” I relaxed slightly, but the fear building up inside me was sending my heart hammering in my chest.
“She could identify us by our voices. Not to mention you idiots touched her, so there might be plenty of DNA they could use to find us.”
‘Hey, you remember all those times I complained my life was boring and asked for a little more adventure? I take it back! Really, I do.’
I had dozed off, as unlikely as that sounds. I woke as the door slid open. Unlike at my house, I was alert right away.
resigned
alarmingly unmoving
he wasn’t dress all in black, something that hadn’t registered back at my house. Not that it mattered. He had on black pants and a dark blue shirt—it looked almost as if he was dressed for a meeting.
a kidnapped looked like.
but my words died under his gaze His expression was sort of blank, but his eyes drilled a hole right through me. I shivered unwillingly, trapped as if he’d pinned me where I stood. A moment later, he looked away and I quickly looked at the ground.
For some reason, I was certain he had good knife throwing skills.
I searched my surrounding and felt disappointment and despair sink in. We were in an empty parking lot, which was bordered by c chain fence on two sides. The third side lead to what looked like a gym, and the fourth led to the street. The bad news was how very open all of this looked; there was nowhere to hide if it turned out he did have some ninja skills. Even though there were houses lining the opposite side of the street, they seemed dead. Would anyone hear me scream?
But be didn’t attack me, instead, he picked up the knife started waking towards the street.
I hurried t follow him,
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