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Oh man. This is art in motion. This is a [bold] real [/bold] poem. This is what poetry is supposed to be like. I looked again and again and yet ...

I understand that you were only supposed to use six words... :) I love it! It's beautiful! Perfect art! I do have questions.... perhaps you should write a story about ...

Hello jenni321! I always find old poems I've written; its like a snapshot into the past! I love the statement at the beginning. I love beginnings like this because they ...

This is a great poems! The last two lines remind me of Doctor Seuss! My favorite lines were about the sword as strong (or stronger (than)) as obsidian. I could ...

Oh man. You should enter this in the Green Room Library Contest Thingy is it isn't too late! This is amazing. It felt like you were describing my life exactly ...

:) It's not often that you find a poem this unique! I really liked it! It was very refreshing; different from a lot of the love poem and such that ...

I keep finding a bunch of poem titles that interest me and then when I click on them to give a review, all it says is "Deleted"! So...here is a ...

This is for the contest: I love this! It's so painstakingly beautiful and so despairingly haunting that i almost cried. The only thing about this poem that I did not ...

For Review Day and the Contest prize! While the rhyme is a little bit forced in some of the spots in this poem, it really is a masterpiece, a work ...

While i enjoyed this poem, it could use work. You need to develop the idea of at the beginning, the consequences of your decision, the choice between life and death. ...

Hello! This is an excellent poem, I truly love it! However, I can't feel it inside, because the allignment is so boring. I can't feel it stir something in my ...

This is such a beautiful poem! Oh, and by the way, Welcome newbie! This is a confusing time to join because it's review day, but hope you settle in nicely. ...

Squire Yubbies bestows this review upon you in the quest for Knighthood! While I love this poem, I don't understand the title? Why "Abyss?" It doesn't talk about the deepness ...

Hello! While I have to say I like the idea behind this poem, it just isn't working for me. Parts of it are too abstract, they don't make sense. These ...

It was a bit hard to follow, it would probably work better if you wrote it in story form. Example (do not use): "So," Mom began, resting her bony elbows ...