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Re: your chasm.
This poem feels like a ride on raw emotion. I like it a lot, the image of bones and tears and skin and fever gave it a sinister and gory ...
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Re: i'm not sure i understand you just yet
hey, I am here for the review. so let's start, first I really liked the premise of the poem, it is a sweet read with a mix of uncertainty that ...
Mar 13, 2023 -
Re: Conquer Rising: Chapter 2.3
there is a lot of growth in the relationship between sister, we also get to know more about their nature , Alainna is a bold, careless girl while solely is ...
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Re: Conquer Rising: Chapter 2.2
hey, I am here for the review, this chapter is the most fun till now, I am glad you made Alainna a little likable, she stood up for her sister ...
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Re: To My Mistakes...
hey , I am here for the review . so lets start from the beginning, the topic of the poem, dedicating the poem to your mistakes is a nice topic ...
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Re: singular
hey, I am here for the review. Let's start from the beginning - "pictures speak a thousand words;" this line nicely sets the poem's topic. ="(But ) a single word ...
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Re: I remember you
this poem seems like it's about an old friendship where you have grown apart. almost every one of us at one point have experienced this feeling of missing an old ...
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Re: of jasper eyes and clandestine meetings-
hey, I am here for the review, I liked the poem very much, it did create the mystery and drama you have mentioned in the category, I am not fully ...
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Re: Summer Vacation
hey ! I am here for a quick review. THE GOOD THINGS - it a simple cute poem of yours, which showed us the imagery of a nostalgic summer that ...
Feb 20, 2023 -
Re: you taste like breezy, open-windowed evenings
hey , I am here for the review ! so lets begin , I have to say you have a very nice way of setting the image of the summer ...
Jan 30, 2023 -
Re: redacted
HEY I AM HERE FOR THE REVIEW! even though I feel like I am not capable of reviewing this poem, but here's my 2 cents please forgive me if I ...
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Re: Roles
hey, I am here for the review. At first, I thought the poem was about rolls, it's a nice word play you did with rolls and roles. "Love and hate. ...
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Re: Cyberpunkers dreams
hey I am here for the review. so I like the concept of the poem describing different part of cyberpunk city and life in each section of poem , I ...
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Re: Soldier's Remorse
wow just wow! I am here for the review but like wow, the topic you chose the way you wrote about it the lines oh my god I love it. ...
Jan 29, 2023 -
Re: just one more game..
hey, I am here for the review. first, I like the topic at first, I thought it was going to be a teen lament over how she doesn't get attention ...
Jan 29, 2023
