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Hello, Ruby68! This was a really beautiful piece of poetry, and I love the description you give about this 'girl on the moon'. I noticed you haven't paid much attention ...

Hello KatGirl! First off, I congratulate you for writing this very meaningful piece of poetry. However, I noticed you haven't given much attention to punctuation? Was this intentional? You used ...

Hello! This was a really, really nice poem! My only worry was that the line - I don't feel the pain as he tells me that he likes her more ...

Hey! I really liked this poem, the rhythm with which it flowed, the way you expressed so much and the meaning you gave. I normally wouldn't italicize the words you ...

Wow, I really liked this poem! It had this solemn humor to it...i really enjoyed it! "He stomps his feet down and declares, "I want to be a Pokemon Master!" ...

Uh. Hey! I'm not sure if this was intentional, since it's a part of a text, but I think I weasled out a teeny nitpick. "Chill, we’re not. He wants ...

Wow. It was really nice! I found the ending a bit abrupt, but that's not a huge problem. I liked your writing style and the way your short sentences expressed ...

Hey! So. At first I didn't see sense in the way you had cut up the sentences, but when I finished it, I didn't mind it so much, since there ...

Hey! So, well, you've already got two big reviews down there which pretty much cover up everything, so I'm not gonna be nitpicking today! I really liked it, her insecurities ...

Wow. This is just..just..beautiful. (I'd put the beautiful in italics but I don't know how, so just imagine it that way) I loved the last line - " for a ...

Hey! Your poem was really powerful and meaningful. I felt some of the words were a bit overboard, but thats your writing style and added to the effect, so thats ...

Gosh! You were...PERFECT! Maybe you should become a dog whisperer or something...you just understand dogs so well... So, about the poem. It was hilarious and I was grinning throughout the ...

Thank you so much for explaining us fangirls\fanboys so aptly! I mean, the number of times I have to explain the reason behind my apparent 'unnecessary' love for 'a bunch ...

This was hilarious! I loved the way you portrayed this so called 'monster' dinosaur to be just a misunderstood buddy! And ketchup? Oh dear, you killed me. That part was ...

Hey! First things first, this poem was great, amazingly energetic and the ending cheered me up! The start was okay, but what I liked was that it's short and repetitive ...