Hey!
First things first, this poem was great, amazingly energetic and the ending cheered me up!
The start was okay, but what I liked was that it's short and repetitive exclamations actually kept me hooked and keen till the end.
I was wondering, the line-
Hurry up! Hurry up!!
If no, -
might have sounded better with 'If not' instead...
I think this poem was different from most poems I've read, but I loved it!
Keep writing!
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