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yadanialler

  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: Another Truth: Hope

    hi there,i'm here for a review. first of all i wanna say thank you for your hard work. i liked this poem very much but my favorite lines were: "Something ...

    Jun 27, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: You.

    hi there, i'm here for a review first of aall i think that ur poem need some more Punctuation,i don't know it's just my opinion,and the ideas need to be ...

    Jun 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Realistic Re: Wander I shall...

    hi there, i'm here for a review first of all i would like to say that i really love your work,inspiratioanl for me and simply amazing. so i liked some ...

    Jun 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: My sister sings songs

    hi there,i'm here for a review first of all i would like to say that i really like your work,especially this one i liked some lines like " When my ...

    Jun 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Lyrical Re: The Eccentric Eight

    hi there first of all i wanna say that i really like your work,awsome and very inspirational i liked some lines like "Their the masters of Art, And there kind ...

    Jun 27, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Poet's Song

    hey first of all i wanna say this is a great poem, i really liked it, your idea is awsome, it never came to my mind, i also think some ...

    Mar 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: If I Could

    hey, first of all i want to say very nice poem, i really liked it it's what we all feel, the love that we wish for i liked some lines ...

    Mar 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: My Sanity and I

    hi, first of all i wanna say i liked this poem very much because it's the case for alot of girls, society is just cruel anyway, i liked some lines ...

    Mar 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Sticks and Stones May Break My Bones

    hi there. first of all i want to say that i really liked this one, short and good, i feel the same way about words, i think they hurt even ...

    Mar 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Pencil tears leaking for suicidal girls

    hello :) first of all i want to say i'm very sorry for your lost and i wish that your friend is in a peacefull place right now. i really ...

    Mar 19, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Silly Humans

    hello :) i would like to say that this poem is absuloutly amazing full of great lines and powerfull thoughts i liked the idea about our stupidness i liked when ...

    Mar 2, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Wilderness

    very nice imagination, full with emotions i think it's the best that i've read so far i liked when you said "Wild rose bushes bloom, thorns as sharp and curved ...

    Mar 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Purge

    wonderfull poem, good imagination, i like it so much i loved when you said "I step back and sit onto the cold tile. I try to dry my eyes in ...

    Mar 2, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Do you hear the piano?

    THAT is an awsome poem, i really love it the way you still hear the piano's sound, that really have alot of meanings. i liked the part: "The beautiful music ...

    Feb 22, 2014
  • Lyrics » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Don't Leave

    very sad song that made me want to go and hug my mom. anyway it's very nice, your a good writer and know how to express your feelings in a ...

    Feb 20, 2014


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