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Re: Stand
Hewo, it's Jade and I'm back with another review. I don't usually review Novel chapters so this is a first for me. On sentence, 4 you made a tiny mistake. ...
May 2, 2018 -
Re: Monster
Holy s***ake sticks! Wow. This was really good! It's Jade, back with another review for an amazing poem. This was so good! For your first try at poetry this was ...
May 2, 2018 -
Re: Ode to Depression
Hewo, I'm back with another review for a wonderful poem. What a strange poem this is. I love it! I really like the way your Ode flowed. Perhaps you should ...
May 2, 2018 -
Re: Before You Graduate (please help me with some editing!)
Hewo, its Jade coming back with another review! So, I like what your doing here but there are some problems that maybe you could help with. I can tell that ...
May 2, 2018 -
Re: Walking To My Death
Hewo, it is Jade once again reviewing an amazing poem. I thought this poem was really good, and after reading it I kinda made this weird squealing sound? Then I ...
May 2, 2018 -
Re: Once There Was Beauty
Hewo wonderful persona. It is Jade, once again giving a review to a beautiful poem. This was so realistic and so true. This is the most amazing and truthful poem ...
May 1, 2018 -
Re: pineapple spines
AH GH GHG JH HDS BXU AZ HDN XW ISN That was really good. It's Jade here, and I am back with another review. I loved the layout so much ...
May 1, 2018 -
Re: Demon Inside
Hewo, I'm back for another review. I really liked this dark poem. I really relate to this on a spiritual level and I just loved the way you put it ...
May 1, 2018 -
Re: First the Rain
Hewo, I'm back to review a wonderful piece. This short entry of lyrics was actually well written, I was a bit hesitant at first to review the lyrics section because ...
May 1, 2018 -
Re: Self Care
Hewo, Jade is here to review another wonderful poem. First, I loved this poem. You did just about everything correctly, your grammar, spelling, punctuation, etc. You also did exceptionally well ...
May 1, 2018 -
Re: Shadowed Painting
Hewo, its Jade writing another review for a wonderful poem! I loved the imagery you included into this, using all the details to create a colorful picture. It might just ...
Apr 28, 2018 -
Re: a cup full of regret
Hewo, its Jade once again writing a review for a wonderful poem. I liked the way you worded this poem and added a lot of imagery into it. I also ...
Apr 28, 2018 -
Re: Mind Your Head
Oof. That punched me in the heart and felt like my heart was suffocating. I loved this in a kind of painful and beautiful way. Your words created many different ...
Apr 27, 2018 -
Re: Blend
Oh my fricken faites! That is amazing and it made me sad for some reason. It was really good and I'm probably gonna write this out and put it on ...
Apr 27, 2018