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  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic Re: Fairy Lights

    Hey, there! Writer1204 here with a small review! You know, I stumbled into your story quite by accident, and I really have no idea why--but it feels like I know ...

    Jan 1, 2018
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: A Cup Of Coffee

    Hello there, Ishan212! Writer1204 here for a review! :) I found it particularly interesting. You were able to deliver an entertaining story without the need to make it super long, ...

    Nov 25, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Bonjour Le Monde

    Coucou, Thisislegacy! It’s great that you’re trying to experiment with writing in other languages. My friend and I were actually trying to write a short story in French, too. You ...

    Nov 13, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Sally - Chapter One of Shattered Crowns

    Well, I'll be damned. Hey there!! Writer1204 here for a quick review. Now, I have to say, this was quite an interesting thing. I'm no expert in historical fiction and ...

    Dec 26, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction Re: ...

    Helloooooo, fight4whatisright! Writer1204 here for a quick review! :) So, I'll write some of my annotations now as I read through and I guess I will give you my final ...

    Dec 21, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Prolouge Draft (Please no hate!!)

    Oh, wow, that was certainly unexpected. Hey there, sapphireluna!! Weiter1204 here for a quick review! :) So, I have to say I was fairly impressed. You came in and had ...

    Dec 21, 2016
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Realistic Re: I Remember

    Well...damn. HELLOOO. I was just scrolling down and found your short story...and jesus christ. WOW. Not only is your writing style very good, but you made me feel something. I'm ...

    Dec 20, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Place

    Hello, neverlander!! Writer1204 here for a quick review. So, I stumbled upon your work at the GreenRoom and decided to give it a try, 'cause--why not? Now, I feel like ...

    Dec 20, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Cold Shoulder

    OH MY KOREAN JESUS LORD. I have read good works here, I honestly have, but NEVER had I read something like this. I have absolutely nothing to complain about here. ...

    Dec 20, 2016
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Fanfiction Re: Silence of Assassins PART ONE

    Oh my, but you simply cannot leave something like that!! I wanna know more! Well, first off, I guess I should say hello, so hi! Writer1204 here for a cheeky ...

    Dec 20, 2016
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Humor Re: Life on the Striker

    OH MY GOD. This is, by far, one of the most hilarious pieces of work I've seen around here. “Well sorry 'Miss I need my beauty sleep' for waking you ...

    Aug 15, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Water Changes Everything

    Hello, there! So, I'd like to start by saying wow. You see, suicide is one of those topics that, unfortunately, is so wrongly addressed and it actually needs a lot ...

    Aug 8, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Action / Adventure Re: Frost and Flame

    Oh my, what a piece of work have we got here!! I enjoyed every single bit of it! Seriously, the imaginary you have is unbelievable. Not many times I read ...

    Aug 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: ever since

    Hey there!! :) Writer1204 here for a quick review!! Well, can I just say how brilliant this is? I really liked the comparison between the narrator's soul and the catastrophic ...

    Jun 19, 2016
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Warrior's Heart

    Hey there, Zackymass!! Writer1204 here for a review! :) This was really nice! (This seems to be a late review... Haha, I hope you don't mind, but it was simply ...

    Jun 19, 2016


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