Hey there, Zackymass!!
Writer1204 here for a review!
This was really nice! (This seems to be a late review... Haha, I hope you don't mind, but it was simply too good for me not to comment! ) Your imagery was breathtaking, and I will admit I have a thing for warrior-kind of stories--or, in this case, poem. There's just something about the way you wrote it that hooked me immediately, and I see so much potential!! Seriously, you were just marvelous with it! I think you chose your words perfectly.
Hope you have a nice day/night and keep on writing!
Sincerely, Writer1204.
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