wordsandwishes

I agree with BenDietz, it felt like I knew her. I also like the way you didn't give the full background story, and just hinted at parts of it instead. ...

I liked your imagery and your ability to connect with the reader. I also like the way your ending hints at something more. My rating:5*s My favorite part: you are ...

Awww... That's so sweet! I really enjoyed this piece. It's flawless, though keep in mind there's always room for improvement. My rating:5*s My favorite part: She is mine Was mine ...

I really liked this poem and yes!- I would believe it. My rating: 5*s My favorite part: Would you believe me? If I told you... There was something more It's ...

GOOD STUFF: 1. Conventions 2. Imagery 3. Connecting with the reader BAD STUFF: 1. Flow was little choppy 2. Layout was a bit scattered I enjoyed reading this piece and ...

GOOD STUFF: 1. Conventions 2. Imagery 3. Connecting with the reader BAD STUFF: 1. Flow was little choppy 2. Layout was a bit scattered I enjoyed reading this piece and ...

GOOD STUFF: 1. Conventions 2. Imagery 3. Voice and emotion 4. Connecting with the reader 5. Layout 6. Flow BAD STUFF: Nothing This was a very good piece and I ...

I didn't really see anything wrong with this. Your conventions, imagery, layout, and voice were done spectacularly. However, your flow was a bit bumpy. I suggest you use more words ...

GOOD STUFF 1. Meaning 2. The firmness in the message 3. Conventions BAD STUFF 1. I think it was a bit too short Overall, I liked this poem, it teaches ...

GOOD STUFF 1. Layout 2. Storyline ( kind of dark ) 3. Conventions 4. Effective mood setting 5. Metaphorical in some ways, threading itself into the story BAD STUFF 1. ...

GOOD STUFF 1. Layout 2. Flow 3.meaning and emotion 4. The way you turn back the repetitive line " All you do is lie, And it kills me. Now all ...

GOOD STUFF 1. Your emotion 2. Your complex meaning 3. Your metaphorical word choice 4. Spelling and grammar 5. Pretty much the entire poem BAD STUFF 1. Your flow was ...

I like the emotion and meaning in this piece. It draws the reader in. Your rhyme scheme was very bumpy though, and it bothered me a little. But it -in ...

I really enjoyed this poem, and I understand that there's been some confusion about your title and meaning; I'd like to try and clarify this a bit since I think ...

I really liked this poem. It throws a nice twist on poems about death, and how you get there. Your ideas were very unique. Anyway, all of your spelling and ...