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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Human/Nature

    Wow, I have to say I really liked this poem! It was absolutely beautiful; an amazing use of imagery. Your conventions all check out, and your flow is great. The ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: No such thing as 'peace'

    Hi there! To start, I have to say I really like the concept of this piece. It's nice to read something a little more origional after a while, and I ...

    Feb 13, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Politics Re: Old version of chapter I

    Hey stffnt0! Before I begin your review, I'd like to say that this is a really unique piece you have here. But, like all good pieces of writing, it needs ...

    Jan 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The Inferno

    First off, I'd like to say that I really like this poem. It's so simple, and yet it conveys so much. And personally, I really like that in poetry. I ...

    Dec 15, 2012
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Once

    This poem just radiates emotion. And it's done in the sort of simplistic beauty that I really like. And I only noticed one tiny thing I you may want to ...

    Aug 14, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: the wrong witch

    I really like this story so far. But there are a lot of technical but easily revised issues in this. 1. When you do your dialogue you don't capitalize the ...

    Aug 13, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Skin Deep - ch 1

    I love your book so far! It has just the right amount of detail, dialogue, and action to make it interesting. And the way you keep leaving cliff hangers leaves ...

    Aug 13, 2012
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, General Re: I've Heard It All Before

    This has a great message and meaning. And I can totally see this being played on the radio and sung at concerts. I love the chorus, it's my favourite part ...

    Aug 13, 2012
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Other Re: Run

    I like this song, and I too, would like to see it a little longer. But the song would still be okay if you didn't. So, I didn't see any ...

    Aug 13, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Weak Man's Pride

    This poem is great! It conveys so much meaning while adding a bit of a story-like feel to it. You know, like a legend. And it worked really well for ...

    Aug 13, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I've been roaming around.

    I really liked this! The way you used the metaphorical imagery so well was awesome. You were able to convey so much with so little, and I appreciate that. It ...

    Aug 13, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I am

    I liked this poem, it really spoke to me. It was just so REAL, like a fountain of hopes and truth, worries and dreams. It's one of those poems that ...

    Aug 3, 2012
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Everything Ends

    This was excellent! The representation with the sphere and the way you described how others -and you- perceived it was perfect. And the only technical issues I saw, was that ...

    Jul 30, 2012
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: The Place I Love

    I like the mood you've set here, new and adventurous. And I didn't see any problems with grammar, spelling, layout, or anything else for that matter. Though I would urge ...

    Jul 27, 2012
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Rhythm and I

    I liked this poem, very short and to the point. And there weren't any technical issues that I could see either. Or any problems creativity and idea wise. But I ...

    Jul 22, 2012


The most difficult thing is the decision to act, the rest is merely tenacity.
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