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I love the thought behind this, and the way it pulls on any heart strings of those who have had to leave behind a good friend. I have a few ...

Hi there! I don't believe I've reviewed for you before, so it's nice to meet you! First things first, I really enjoyed this piece. I feel that you got your ...

I like this poem, but I didn't entirely understand it the first time I read it through. I feel like more imagery and more emphasis on the point (that is, ...

You seem to have a quiet poem here, one that is intended to be read almost in a whisper. It holds pain and longing, all of which are displayed (for ...

Hi there! So the first thing I noticed, of course, is the repetitiveness of this poem. While sometimes this is a good thing, it does make your poem a bit ...

I really like the beginning of this poem, but I feel the end doesn't hold the same passion as the start. The rhythm and rhyme is good except in the ...

Hi there, I don't believe I have reviewed for you before, so it is nice to meet you! You have here my favorite type of poetry, and the type I ...

I like the beginning here, but I feel like that is all you have: a beginning. I can't connect well enough with this poem without a little more to go ...

I love this poem, and feel it really encompasses the true drama of the passion of music. I do have a few comments that might make a difference, but the ...

She smiles, and she chuckles, at everyone more than me. And it's my duty, to feign apathy. (This right here just screams combo breaker. It's a great line in and ...

I'm so glad I could help! It's a great start, and the confusion with the tenses is completely gone! I'd be interested to read some more :). Let me know ...

Very very cute :). I liked it a lot and you did a good job with the emotional input. You used to tell me I was This just doesn't quite ...

This was very good :). I liked it very much, but I REALLY think you need to add a name to it. You aren't going to get much attention to ...

This is very cute, and I like it. My biggest problem with it being that it seems to change into a different.....I don't know, but I feel as though it ...

Cute :). Very cute, and very well written. I like this a lot and I'm not entirely sure what else you could do to fix it except elaborate, which you've ...