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  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Why do you hate me?

    Hi. Here are a few notes: "Prank you" is incorrect. The correct form of it is "prank to you" "Just the smallest things" : the word "just" must be "only" ...

    Jan 3, 2019
  • Poetry » Humor, Other Re: Fairy Tales

    Good poem piece and good descriptions here. Good job! I really enjoyed it. The idea behind this work is quite unique. Every word is well-chosen and correct. I wish it ...

    Jan 3, 2019
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Is It Love?

    Hi. Your poet was quite amazing piece of work. You are very good in describing human feelings. You have chosen your words very correctly and carefully in this poem, and ...

    Jan 3, 2019
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Story of You: (A Ballad)

    Hi. Your poem was very beautiful and catching piece of work. It is a mixture of story telling and poetry and there was really good balance between these two. You ...

    Jan 3, 2019
  • Poetry » Literature, Health Re: Claiming Faith

    Hi dear Maria. I love your short and minimal style of poetry. I think this one is better than your poem about Cindrella. I think you are not very good ...

    Jan 3, 2019
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: Deaths' Truth and Life's Lie

    Hi. You have written a great piece about freedom and I liked the contrast between life and death, lie and truth in your story. But may I ask you why ...

    Jan 3, 2019
  • Art » Other, General Re: My Profile Picture

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    o intresting piece of art.i love its eyes. they are really pretty. and also its lovely face. i hope you liked my review. but its hair is a bit weird. ...

    Nov 2, 2017
  • Art » Fantasy, General Re: Cora From Oliver's Travels

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    o intresting piece of art.i love its eyes. they are really pretty. and also its lovely face. i hope you liked my review. but its face is a bit weird. ...

    Nov 2, 2017
  • Art » Fanfiction, General Re: My Love...

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    o intresting piece of art.i love it. they are really pretty. and also its lovely face. i hope you liked my review. but the cat is a bit weird. that ...

    Nov 2, 2017
  • Art » Fanfiction, General Re: Yellowfang's Exile

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    o intresting piece of art.i love its eyes. they are really pretty. and also its lovely face. i hope you liked my review. but its mouth is a bit weird. ...

    Nov 2, 2017
  • Art » Spiritual, Realistic Re: Eyes

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    so intresting piece of art.i love its eyes. they are really pretty. and also its lovely face. i hope you liked my review. but its mouth is a bit weird. ...

    Nov 2, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Review Re: Beautiful Words

    great piece of work. reading books is really intresting. a person without a friend can befriend his or her books. exactly like myself. i can escape my loneliness by refuging ...

    Sep 12, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Politics, General Re: Teen Politics; How the Media Affects How Much We Know

    yes. i think media really affect people s thoughts. but we must consider that in many countries, life is so hard for people. especially women and children. i am myself ...

    Sep 12, 2017
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Jane Eyre Class Opinions

    i love reading about victorian era but i don t like novels of the era. maybe it is because i think they are very repeative. they try to teach the ...

    Sep 12, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Satire, Culture Re: Angles and Normans, part 1

    that is a great piece of historical fiction. i love the æ letter very much. old english and normans very always one of my favorite historical subjects besides american history. ...

    Sep 12, 2017


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