warionack25

I actually think this is a pretty good poem. This is going to be kind of a quick review seeing as how my class is almost over but you know ...

So, I'm liking this story so far, but there are a few concerns. There are a few things that I thought could have been further delved into, like how are ...

I like this poem, but I don't quite understand the message of it. If I must be honest, I think it's cliche, but I like it anyway. You should try ...

Hey Katgirl! I remember you from the chats, and you seem pretty awesome indeed, and a good writer, so let's get to reviewing! Hmm, pretty plain and simple poem you ...

Alright, I think this is a pretty good story, but I think it's a little cliche. Phrases like "Dagger being driven into my stomach" and "I'm free" don't sit very ...

I really like this little story, though I would think of it more as a performance poem than a short story, if I might be honest. You have cool imagery ...

Hi, I'm warionack, and I'll be your reviewer for this evening/day/night and/or apocalypse (Still trying to figure out if my little intro is stupid or not... Eh, what'll you do?) ...

Let me say that I really like the way this story is going! You paint in interesting picture with what has happened in this universe, and I look forward to ...

I agree with Perks when I say you have a very good message, and I highly recommend you actually make this into a song, or maybe write some poetry concerning ...

Ooooohhhhh, I must say I very much like where this is going! On one hand, I don't think the prologue is very good at making us care about this character, ...

Haunting. I like it. To be honest I would consider this poetry, but even then, it's very good poetry. You paint a dark world of death, madness, panic, and despair ...

I thought this was a pretty good poem, nice work! One thing I must say, is to make sure to keep track of your syllable counts in your poems, too ...

This is honestly a hard one to review. On one end, I want to say that it's a little cliche, because I've heard a lot of stories written like this ...

I see this as both a short story and a poem, it's so poetic and beautiful. I really like your imagery and what your painting here. Though it isn't the ...