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AMEN SISTA! Beautiful work! The battle between acceptance and failure relates to every human out there. The battle between compliment and insult relates to every teenager... especially girls. Great fl

Fantastic! I love your vision of hell....:D With your first paragraph, I feel you should be more descriptive on you descending to hell. Really give the reader insight on how ...

Great poem! If some words rhyme then so be it. You do not have to pick to a pattern of rhyme or none at all. As long as everything goes ...

LOVE IT! such a great poem! I love how you were able to use imagery in an effective way that increased the flow of the poem. The stanza size was ...

Incredible Idea! To not only portray the beauty in the aborignal history, past and present, but the stigma! The ending truly spoke to me. How contradictory our world is. How ...

Great poem! Beautiful flow and you really emote feeling into your words! It is easy to read and easy to feel to! It reminds me of a relationship between someone ...

I like the imagery you are using! This has greaaaaaat stuff in it! I like it has too many separate ideas to be one piece. But if you desire to ...

Amazing! Just stunning flow and precision. You can tell the simplicity was well put together! I want to share what it reminds me of! It reminds me of schizophrenia! A ...

Great poem! You are super talented! You have great stanza structure and flow to your poem. You start with a steady lead into unknown territory, then letting the readers know ...

Beautiful work! I love how your lines are only 3-6 words long. I think you should space it only ( not because I do not like the idea of cluttered ...

Great poem! I love how you structured the poem and leave the punch for the end. This really allows the words to sink in and then be forced to think ...

Great work! I love the way you have structured your poem. It flows extremely well and I love how it seems like a mess of words with a very specific ...

I love the receptiveness in the poem, because even the though the emotion changes the underlying theme doesn't. This is a poem you can read again and again gaining new ...

Great poem! Love the flow,the words and especially the feel! I love how you start off with the conversation with you and your mind. The fact that the readers do ...

Well done! That was incredible! The title has a beautiful flow off the tongue and as when used in the poem. It brings forward the undiagnosed and unsolved issues that ...