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  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Double-two, Double-two

    Hey MissPhoenix. I was drawn into this short story by the title... so, here's my two cents: I'm writing this part before I even finished reading because I just want ...

    Oct 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Deleted 60

    Hi Lumi! As soon as I saw your name as the author, I just had to read this poem. So, here's my two cents: I've always loved the structure of ...

    Oct 25, 2015
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, General Re: No Shame

    Hey Siren! I'm a huge fan of poetry, so I decided to delve a little more into lyrics as well; I'm so glad one of the first lyrics I read ...

    Oct 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A birthday poem for my friend

    Hi ducksyonthemoon! I love that you wrote a poem as a birthday present for a friend, so I'm more than happy to give you my two cents: Just like any ...

    Oct 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Reset switch

    Hey Ruben! I was really intrigued by the title of your work, so here's my two cents: I really like the opening. It immediately sets an anxious tone for the ...

    Oct 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: The Unattainable Man

    Hey there NewYork! I noticed that you are new here, so I'm very excited to give you your first review! Here's my two cents: He is always lingering in the ...

    Oct 25, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Humor Re: exchange from a dream that i don't remember

    Hi inkwell! I have a weird connection to this poem, which is why I want to review it instead of just comment. :P Here's my two cents: First of all, ...

    Oct 24, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: mannequins

    Sigh, you have amazed me yet again with your work... here's my two cents, love: The adjectives you use are incredible. Word choice is so important, especially in poetry, and ...

    Oct 24, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Not This Time

    Hey Mia! I really like what you've written, so here's my two cents: This piece is really easy to relate to, and I think that's part of why I like ...

    Oct 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Splinters In Perfect Glass

    Hi Priceofwords! This piece is lovely, and I am humbled to review it. Here's my two cents: I was immediately attracted to the poem because I, personally, struggle with self ...

    Oct 24, 2015
  • Script » Dramatic, Romantic Re: The Unlikely Stop

    Hi Hazel Grace! I've never read a script on here before, although I love plays, and I'm so glad yours was the first I read! Here's my two cents: I ...

    Oct 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: Nothingleftnothingleftnothingleft

    Hi Stranger! I don't think I've ever reviewed something of yours, so I'm so glad I found you in the Green Room! Here's my two cents: I have such a ...

    Oct 24, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Big City.

    Hi Lettersnumbersonly! Here's my two cents: I have a strange liking for what you've written- it's very simple, but I feel as though there's a much deeper meaning than you're ...

    Oct 23, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Self Cultivation

    Hi Wiley! Here's my two cents: I really really really like this poem. I have struggled with body image issues and an eating disorder as well, so this really speaks ...

    Oct 23, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Grenade

    Hi Glados! Here's my two cents: Although I like what you've written and I feel like it is a piece that a lot of people can relate to, the grammar ...

    Oct 9, 2015


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