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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Supernatural Re: ice princess;part 2

    hey! umaima here to review [Quote/Soulnmaka8] "Yup,well,technically I was taken to a private facility and there was these weird looking guys in white coats examining me from a destint. [quote] ...

    Mar 31, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The adventures of two friends

    hey rose, Umaima here for your review...quick ain't I? XD So well first of all very good job. I would advice you to proofread it before submitting once and also ...

    Mar 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Wasting 150 Points...

    Hey, Your poem didn't actually look like one when I first read it, it was like you were saying something directly to the reader which isn't really what a poem ...

    Mar 24, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Alien

    Hey, I am Umaima and am going to review your submission today! Well I will give a short and sweet review for your poem because I couldn't really find any ...

    Mar 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Health, Narrative Re: I am afraid.

    Hey, Umaima here to review your submission! Great poem, I enjoyed reading it. I liked the way you used the idea of a shy girl expression her feelings. And the ...

    Mar 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Don't Worry

    hey, Umaima here to review your submission today. I loved your poem. It had a meaning and I could clearly make out everything you wanted to say from it. It ...

    Mar 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Caged Bird and the Caged Lady

    Hey, Umaima here to review your submission. According to your age this is really very good. Keep it up and keep writing! However, there were grammatical errors which I am ...

    Mar 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: It Always Rains

    Hey. Umaima here to review your submission. First of all nice poem, well done. There was a meaning in this poem and the word usage was not bad. Now coming ...

    Mar 24, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Toutouwai Kakariki

    Hey! Umaima here to review your submission. First of all I think you should put more time before submitting your work, now let that be here or anywhere else. Read ...

    Mar 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Horror Re: Monsters.

    Hey, I am umaima and i will be reviewing your poem today! To start with, great job scandalous, You have a nice piece here I guess you are really afraid ...

    Mar 20, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Always There

    hey, I am umaima and I will be reviewing your work today! First of all I would like to say that this piece was good not great but worth giving ...

    Mar 20, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Romantic Re: memories

    hey I am Umaima and as I said I am reviewing your story today! well first of all nice concept. It was fun to read and i could get your ...

    Mar 19, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Deleted

    hey there, I am umaima and I am going to review your submission today, Well first of all I would like to say that your poem was really great, It ...

    Mar 19, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Satire Re: The Mirrior

    okay so here is your short and sweet review for your poem It was fun, interesting and certainly had lesser mistakes than before so keep it up girlfriend. that's it ...

    Mar 18, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The Porcelain Doll

    hye, first of all great poem but it had places where it didn't really make sence well the problem was that at some places it did rhyme but it did ...

    Mar 18, 2013


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