umaima

okay hye I am umaima and I am reviewing your work today first of all nice poem, I enjoyed reading it and it was interesting so great job writing it ...

well the poem has rhythym alright but its lacking in meaning...rhythym is a very important aspect of poetry but not a must so it wasn't that impostant to make it ...

well this was a great poem and I enjoyed it and also it had a meaning, + loved your idea of describing a playboy but heres the problem it was ...

hey I am umaima and I am going to give you a short review here I really liked your piece and to t ell you the truth it was just ...

hey, I am umaima and I am going to give you a short review on this one Well first of all i would like to say that your poem is ...

hey! it's me umaima and i will be reviewing your submission today. first of all I loved your poem because it just gave a very clear understanding to what you ...

hey, first of all i am Umaima and I will be reviewing your poem today Your poem is really good like really really really good. The rhythm is really nice ...

hey, this is umaima and I am going to review your poem today Well first of all I really like your poem because it There is a kind of feeling ...

hey i will be reviewing your peom today it's kind of incomplete and unclear but this is good as it is your first poem. You should work hard on rhythm ...

hey black, I will give you a short review on this one because there arent that many mistake, first of all read it once again because the mistakes that you ...

amazing poem, it has a nice rhythm till the lines 'Rise together and not above. sow the seeds of salvation.' in this stanza the rhythm kind of got disturbed overall ...

great job seriously.. their are some grammatical errors so I would recommend you to revise it once again but the plot and the way it is written is amazing, very ...

Well I like reading poems and reviewing them so here I am reviewing your poem The poem actually was good but it had its drawbacks which I have stated below ...

Listen poetry doesn't mean writing like you are writing in a diary. It has to have a Rhythm. That is the most important aspect of poetry that you got to ...

The poem is really amazing but the thing which is most important while writing a poem is what's missing. Rhythm. When someone reads a poem it should go in a ...