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well the poem has rhythym alright but its lacking in meaning...rhythym is a very important aspect of poetry but not a must so it wasn't that impostant to make it that way...
the most important thing is the poem should make sence and should specifically have a meaning which can be understood so try to focus on that more next time when you write a poem
other than this i would say that your poem was good but you need to improve and believe me you will so best of luck for your other works
if you need anything even advise you can always ask me..
Umaima
Even Google isn't helping me decipher all this jargon, so this piece makes next to no sense to me. If this is intended to be a companion to a story you're composing, mention that, or, even better, actually incorporate it into the story.
OK this is definitely original and extremely interesting I really like this kind of poem.
But these things that rime they sound a bit wrong some don't really stick like angels and insects.
At any rate this is supper good grammar and spelling really nice job.
Keep writing and have some very good luck.