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trashykawa

And then, I was a careless fool

  • Short Story » Dramatic, Horror Re: Hysteria

    Hi lemonayyde! Hiraeth here to review this amazing short story that you've written. First, I love the plot. I like how in just a few, short lines, you've managed to ...

    Jan 7, 2019
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: The Hunt

    Hi fellow night-owl! (at least, that's what I hope your username means) This is hiraeth here for a review. So i have thing for morbidity and cannibalism. Okay, not the ...

    Jan 6, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Mother - Chapter 3.1

    Hi! Great job on this one. Though (and please don't be sad about this, it's just my opinion) the humor was a little bit....too dry? I mean i definitely smiled ...

    Jan 6, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Mother - Chapter 2.1

    A-ha-ha-ha! Henrik! I found the name! Hi Zoom, Hiraeth here again for a review. So, like the last time, you've done an amazing job! Visuals are very vivid, you've chosen ...

    Jan 4, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Mother - Chapter 1

    Hi Zoom! This was an excellent read, and I enjoyed myself thoroughly. Your protagonist's dry humor is quite amusing, which helped me go through to the end of this long ...

    Jan 3, 2019
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Literature Re: Cinderella ~ in the Words of a Poem

    Hi Maria! Hiraeth here again for a review. This is a great attempt at converting a fairly complicated story (i never really liked cinderella much) into a poem. Clearly, you ...

    Jan 3, 2019
  • Poetry » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: Batman !!!

    Hi muzzamil! Hiraeth here for a review. First, let me just say, Marvel is so much better than DC {if you wanna fight about it, bring it on! :D}. But, ...

    Jan 3, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: To Win Your Hand Chapter 1.1

    Hi Alexa! This was a really fun read, I enjoyed every bit of it. I'll begin by saying that the next part to this better come fast; not because there ...

    Jan 1, 2019
  • Poetry » Literature, Health Re: Claiming Faith

    Hi Maria! (or is that just the name of your cat?) The message that you send through this is nice, and I like your rhymes. You have nice rhythm too, ...

    Jan 1, 2019
  • Script » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Mind Games (Part 4)

    Hi Raven! So lets start by saying that I really liked the New Andrea. Confident, outspoken, seizing the spotlight. Yup, it was definitely a change for the better; I like ...

    Jan 1, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A Tale

    Hi caitlynn! Hiraeth here for a review for this awesome poem. I love this poem, i really do (i mean, i love any poem that rhymes, but this one rhymes ...

    Dec 30, 2018
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: My day

    woah. like seriously. woah. These adolescent-puberty-hormone thing really messes with our heads, doesn't it? It also looks as though it takes away the brains of those around us, no one ...

    Dec 30, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Hell or High Water (Chapter 26.1)

    Hi mellifera! this is Hiraeth with a review for this amazing work. First; let me tell you that you had my attention from the first line. Not that it was ...

    Dec 30, 2018
  • Short Story » Humor, Fantasy Re: Little Red's Return- A Story in 100 Words

    Hi interstellar! This is Hiraeth here for a review. So like others before me have already stated, this WAS hilarious. Reversal of roles, eh? Looks like big bad wolf's kin ...

    Dec 30, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Remembrance of the Lost

    Hey hannalynn! this is Hiraeth here to review a really heart felt poem. First; i like that you chose to write about the relationship between a mother and a child- ...

    Dec 30, 2018


As a writer, I'm more interested in what people tell themselves happened rather than what actually happened.
— Kazuo Ishiguro