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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Something

    hehe, I liked this, I think it has a sort of nursery rhyme feel, but at the same time, it's older than that. It made me laugh too. My only ...

    May 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Your Lies

    aww, I loved this poem :) Although the topic was a little cliche, I think it was brilliant. It was sad, but not too emotional at the same time. It ...

    May 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Too late

    Hello Bamboozler ^_^ I really liked this poem, even though it's short, and has a few problems (which can easily be fixed :)) I thought that the faint imagery and ...

    May 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: To None I Can Remember

    Here to bamboozle you ^_^ I thought that this was brilliant :) (although I didn't really understand it, for me it was some sort of hazy reckoning of defiance and ...

    May 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Penny Lane

    (before I review, I just wanted to say, that even though when you think about it, you are not ON the bus, it's not very obvious to some people, I ...

    May 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: My Best Friend

    Here to bamboozle you ^_^ I really liked this poem, it's good that you know that your poems have gotten better, and that you admit that this isn't your best ...

    May 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Jelly Beans

    Hi Power Ranger! Here to bamboozle you ^_^ First off, I really loved this poem, it was sweet and tasted yummy - no, I did NOT try to eat the ...

    May 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Sincerely, Brain

    Wow, I really loved this :) It was amazing how you could portray sincere emotion, yet make it humourous at the same time ^_^ pffflee this is such a terrible ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Cannibal Fame

    Wow. I am literally at a loss for words. I doubt that I'll ever say this is the best poem I've ever read, yet for what it is, it's brilliant. ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I wonder Why

    Just, well, hmmm... I can't even go into the poem itself here, I didn't check, are you new? Although I'm sure we all love the rainbow, we would prefere BLACK ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Edge of Insanity

    Well, first off, welcome to YWS! I really liked this poem, and freeverse is fine, it doesn't make it any less of a poem/less epic ^_^ (also, teardrop suggested google-ing, ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: An Amazing Poem

    Wow. This was just so brilliantly funny, yet simple :) I really have nothing to add, except: I think, you should say the tangerine is "pink" ;) Green just doesn't ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Rejection

    well, first off, I really liked this ^_^ it was emotional, yet not too cliche, and very interesting xD I'm afraid to say, although stargazer9927 split your stanzas up for ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Nike - acrostic poem

    Acrostic poems are really cool, and well I loved this one. ^_^ I had to do them in school about four years ago, and they were all to do with ...

    May 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Trust

    Hi! Well, I'd love to say I really loved this poem, but, um I didn't. I'm not saying you're not a good writer (because you probably are ^_^) or that ...

    May 1, 2011


Morning without you is a dwindled dawn.
— Emily Dickenson