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Re: Something
hehe, I liked this, I think it has a sort of nursery rhyme feel, but at the same time, it's older than that. It made me laugh too. My only ...
May 28, 2011 -
Re: Your Lies
aww, I loved this poem :) Although the topic was a little cliche, I think it was brilliant. It was sad, but not too emotional at the same time. It ...
May 28, 2011 -
Re: Too late
Hello Bamboozler ^_^ I really liked this poem, even though it's short, and has a few problems (which can easily be fixed :)) I thought that the faint imagery and ...
May 28, 2011 -
Re: To None I Can Remember
Here to bamboozle you ^_^ I thought that this was brilliant :) (although I didn't really understand it, for me it was some sort of hazy reckoning of defiance and ...
May 28, 2011 -
Re: Penny Lane
(before I review, I just wanted to say, that even though when you think about it, you are not ON the bus, it's not very obvious to some people, I ...
May 22, 2011 -
Re: My Best Friend
Here to bamboozle you ^_^ I really liked this poem, it's good that you know that your poems have gotten better, and that you admit that this isn't your best ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Jelly Beans
Hi Power Ranger! Here to bamboozle you ^_^ First off, I really loved this poem, it was sweet and tasted yummy - no, I did NOT try to eat the ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Sincerely, Brain
Wow, I really loved this :) It was amazing how you could portray sincere emotion, yet make it humourous at the same time ^_^ pffflee this is such a terrible ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Cannibal Fame
Wow. I am literally at a loss for words. I doubt that I'll ever say this is the best poem I've ever read, yet for what it is, it's brilliant. ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: I wonder Why
Just, well, hmmm... I can't even go into the poem itself here, I didn't check, are you new? Although I'm sure we all love the rainbow, we would prefere BLACK ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Edge of Insanity
Well, first off, welcome to YWS! I really liked this poem, and freeverse is fine, it doesn't make it any less of a poem/less epic ^_^ (also, teardrop suggested google-ing, ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: An Amazing Poem
Wow. This was just so brilliantly funny, yet simple :) I really have nothing to add, except: I think, you should say the tangerine is "pink" ;) Green just doesn't ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Rejection
well, first off, I really liked this ^_^ it was emotional, yet not too cliche, and very interesting xD I'm afraid to say, although stargazer9927 split your stanzas up for ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Nike - acrostic poem
Acrostic poems are really cool, and well I loved this one. ^_^ I had to do them in school about four years ago, and they were all to do with ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Trust
Hi! Well, I'd love to say I really loved this poem, but, um I didn't. I'm not saying you're not a good writer (because you probably are ^_^) or that ...
May 1, 2011
