tigeraye

‘What. The. Fuck,’ whispered Rachelle. Nothing like kicking off things with an f-bomb to grab a reader's attention. Jannah turned to her and see Manisha was grabbing Rachelle’s arm. How ...

I enjoy the drama of this and the pacing in general -- it's very fast and exciting, and your style of writing commands the reader to be on edge, giving ...

It seems like here, you just wanted to fill space until you could advertise your YouTube channel. In other words, you're trolling. Which is cool, because trolling is fun every ...

Hi, acm, good to see you around again :) I'm not sure which story was a cooler idea, the one where the main character was a spider or this one, ...

This is a sad story...can't even imagine what it would be like to lose a loved one when you're on the other end of the phone with them. I didn't ...

This is a nice story! You emote your characters feelings very well, it's easy to sympathize with them just because of that aspect. You also control the mood very well ...

Do'amha was awoken sometime in the night. It wasn't to anything in particular, just the soft sound of metal being scraped together. I didn't mention it in my last review, ...

Wow, this was incredibly mesmerizing. Just about anyone who knows or knew a drug addict should be able to relate to this piece...I was able to picture everything about it, ...

Hello. I've been meaning to read this for a while because I keep seeing new chapters in the green room and love the Elder Scrolls series. I like to start ...

This is a quirky, amusing piece of writing!! I love the idea in general, and the simplicity of how you implement it. I never would've thought to write a story ...

I love the sensory detail in this chapter. You really excel at immersing a reader into your world, making them feel that they're in your story. Every sense here comes ...

I think you have a pretty neat story. Having the narrator read a letter left by a historical figure is an intelligent way to portray a real person without making ...

I would never in a million years have thought of writing a story from the perspective of a spider, and now I'm cursing myself because I never thought of doing ...

This is a neat idea for a story, and although you haven't uploaded any chapters it does sound like something I'd be interested in reading. But this felt more like ...

You certainly have an interesting style of writing -- this reads as if was inspired by some of the old romanticism authors. It's very poetic and fascinating, worded in an ...