thosethatgotaway

Hey just here for a quick drop by and review :) i like this poem and can relate to it since i have 1 older sibling and that's it. I ...

i really like the first paragraphs. good definition of the word and your friend sets a good image of that. But i feel like you should add more to it ...

just here for a review don't worry :) this was a very interesting chapter, but very good as well. when i finished i didn't even notice i was smiling at ...

this is very off topic of a review but i like your avatar :) anyways back to the poem you wrote lol all the stanzas fit well rhythmically. for me ...

i read title and thought "hmm... i do wonder" lol. so i thought i'd drop by for a read and quick review :) you get your point across well even ...

i think you should put a slight rhyme to it. It is really good without it as well but maybe make it half and half. If you need a little ...

i liked the 1 2 1 2 rhyming pattern you had within this poem. i could tell you had a slight message within this and how your title related to ...

i was curious with the title of this poem because it had the whatever in it lol. when i read the poem i understood why the whatever was part of ...

This is an interesting poem. I didn't expect this when I saw the title which can be both good and bad. I honestly like the imagery and how the countdown ...

I really like this poem :) it's interesting to see what others come up with when there are related poems to the same topic of heartbreak. It really is a ...

I late the title and was drawn into what those words might have been. I found it interesting when I read the poem and found the feeling of those words ...

i liked your word choice in this :) i think parts of this were interesting kinda balancing the whole thing out in general. i like the title because it made ...

there was a good sense of emotion in this :) i could feel it no doubt. this is a good piece of work, i like the style of it :) ...

I was drawn to this because of the title lol because i'm sort of obsessed with fairy-tales because of the show "Once Upon a Time". but anyways to the review ...

just here for a drop by :) the title honestly brought me here because it made me curious when i saw it in the list, so that's a good thing ...