thetaostedwriter

Hi hi! I'm back again! So, this is a new format I'm seeing from you. Telling several different P.o.V.'s in one story isn't easy, and I'm kind of happy that ...

Alrighty, let's do this. For starters, this is the length I was talking about for a short story. You could get away with going a little shorter, but this would ...

Hello Hello! You did a good job setting the scene here, which is improvement from some of the other stories I've read from you. You're getting better every day! I ...

Hello, hello! Yet another song, I see? Let's get into it! So, I know yesterday I reviewed a song I think was younger than this one, however I'm seeing some ...

Hiiiii! So, reading through this, I have a few things to say that might help. I know previously, I might have reviewed a song by you, but I'm here again ...

Hello, hello! From the start, the scene set for this poem is very nice. It's warm and immersive, good job on that! The observations made helped push this, help to ...

Hey CATS!

Hello hello!!! Taost here! I didn't realize there were other pieces related to this until I read the "Related Items" box, so I'll definitely have to go and read the ...

Heyya again! I love the idea and the motive you had for this poem, and the story it tells is chilling, but I stumbled a bit while reading it. As ...

Heyya!! This is short and it disappointed me a little, but I can understand why thanks to your description. I love how Bart first shows this nonchalant kind of behavior ...

Hey there! Taost here to write you a review! Starting off, this poem is so cruelly relatable. In both a good and bad way. In the good way, almost everyone ...

Hi there! As a fellow musician and composer, it was hard to pass up something like this. And I do have some advice! Writing a song in the form of ...

Hello, hello! Welcome to YWS! Let's see what you've got here, yeah? First opinion from reading this is, it's realistic. It doesn't tiptoe around anything, it's straight to the point. ...

Hey, Hop! Been a long time since I wrote one of these but here we go! The loaf of bread. (The hook of the story, what drew me in, the ...

Hey there! It's Taost, back in action! You're little poem here is going to be my first review in a good long while, AND with my new reviewing template, so ...