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Re: this misery is subjective
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Nov 30, 2014
Hai there. Allow me to comment on this lovely piece of yours! There's little I can fault you on as far as content- though as a reader, I may not ... -
Re: Holding on till' May
ohh i see. no problem!
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Re: Yet Another YWS Birthday Poem
yeah my computer was doing that last night XD thanks
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Re: Bravery
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Nov 30, 2014
Hm. This could be taken different ways. I could see how one might differ from the message of this poem, but that isn't for me to judge. You're the poet, ... -
Re: Life
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Nov 30, 2014
Hm. A definitely thought-provoking subject. I would have liked to see you expound on this even more, or leave an even greater impact in just as few words. A few ... -
Re: monotony
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Nov 30, 2014
woah. Why do i love this so much?! I don't even have anything to say. Good gravy! I love it! Ahh! Just...yeah. Oh dear. I better stop. Reviewing all day. ... -
Re: Yet Another YWS Birthday Poem
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Nov 30, 2014
aww, nice. I'm sure one who's been here on YWS for years finds this much closer to their heart than someone like me. All the same, you bring a different ... -
Re: Through It All
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Nov 30, 2014
okay I have tried to write songs when I was much younger, and being this is a song for your mother...who am I kidding, I can't review this! XD I ... -
Re: Ode to an Orchid
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Nov 30, 2014
AHHH SO MUCH REVIEWINGGGG Hi there! Wow this poem reminds me a lot of a poem my cousin wrote! (Maybe you'll know her one day when she's a famous poet- ... -
Re: Potions (Imperfections)
thanks, I'll take these into consideration :) yes, I did mean to repeat 'you' btw
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Re: Potions (Imperfections)
thanks very much! it was actually inspired tonight as I took my own it's a metaphor off that. I think the biggest reason I centered the last line was because ...
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Re: Natural love
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Nov 30, 2014
hi there and happy review day! why am I up at midnight reviewing I have a full day tomorrow...-__- I really think this is a nice poem for starters. Good ... -
Re: III:The Revelation
...then you should read more
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Re: III:The Revelation
but you did give me an idea to describe his eyes as i described her father's eyes before
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Re: I:The Room
thanks! I finished in two more parts. I realize there's controversy on her name, but I haven't named any of the characters in this short for specific reasons pertaining to ...
Nov 30, 2014