theironnovelist

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Hey! Last one in the Green Room! I hope I can get this done before someone else does! Okay so I have to be honest, I haven't read your other ...

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herro there This almost sounds like lyrics or a rap, to be honest. I would have liked to see this broken into shorter stanzas somehow. Your choosing. The biggest standout ...

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BAHAHAHA Oh my word I saw this was so popular and thought 'there's no way it's that good- it's a comedy!' But holy shoot that was funny. I feel REALLY ...

thank you so much! You have no idea how much that means. I'm honored. I was really pleased with how this described my own mind, too XD my goal was ...

danka I shall take these things into consideration

GAH i'm sorry all my reviews are double-posting today -__-

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aww how cute! I love that this can be for anyone, not so specific. I love it overall. A few minor suggestions: 'this is a poem, that much is true' ...

thank you ! I reviewed your piece Chaos in the Mind :)

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I love your blend of spiritual and natural elements in this piece! I can't fault you on any word choice, I really like it all. The only thing I'd say ...

definitely

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ooh way to give a unique poem with some thought-provoking content! I don't have anything to fault you on except a few grammatical errors: "story's" in the third line first ...

thank you! even so, a while ago I posted a revised version that I like even more...could you let me know what you think sometime?

so sorry, my reviews keep posting twice!

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hi there! This reminds me of a poem my cousin wrote (or perhaps just read) years ago. Love it! At first, especially with the formatting you used, this seemed more ...

sorry my computer double-posts all my reviews! feel free to delete one