theironnovelist

interesting ending... this reminded me of something perhaps The Little Match Girl (children's story by Hans Christian Andersen) would have written from her perspective. If you don't know who that ...

Ok my dyslexic brain totally thought this was called The City of the Trumpet and I was like "wait what I don't get it" after I read this, and then ...

I am so proud of your commitment to keeping these chapters coming! You're so much better than me. Teach me how to write fast. I'm liking the diversity of your ...

LANGSTON HUGHES IS ONE OF MY FAVORITE PEOPLE EVER yes, I remember studying this poem of his this is based off. hello, and sorry I had to get that out. ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS and congrats on your first published work!! My name is the.iron.novelist and i'll be reviewing this for the first time! So firstly, I love the ...

hello there! To start off I like the atmosphere of these lyrics. Dark and cold, depressing and mysterious, much like heartbreak. Sad, but ever asking, "What's next?" These words beg ...

I commend your first published work to YWS, my dearest Stephanie:). And congrats on the likes! You've got as many as I've ever gotten on a novel/chapter. Most people don't ...

How interesting. I never would have guessed there to be such an important message in a poem about...well, butts. Hey there and welcome to YWS! I'm happy to be of ...

hey there! I recall writing a poem in a similar style to this for school one year. You seem to be quite the experienced writer and poet. I love your ...

hi there! I don't recognize any works from you so this'll be a first for me:) I'm pretty impressed with your ability to write lyrics. The rhythm and rhyme is ...

hi there! ima review your lovely piece here! so right off the bat I can see this is a personal poem, which is great. When writing, start with something you ...

Hi again! Okay I have to say I love these lyrics!! I personally prefer this over your latest song, but that's just me. I'll have to listen to the audio ...

hey windsailor! loving your avatar, first of all:) so on to reviewing: I love where these lyrics are coming from. I haven't listened to the audio, and I'm not much ...

hello there! iron.novelist here to review your work:) I don't believe I've read anything from you here we go. As an aspiring poet myself, I can say you're on your ...

hey bro. Saw this a loooong time ago, needed to review something, and realized I've never reviewed this! So off I go. this has a good message. it's quite relate-able, ...