thegirlwhowrites

Hi! I'm also not American and I've recently been discussing the American Dream at school so I thought I'd give your poem a look :) Disclaimer: I do not remember ...

Hello! I think you have quite a cool idea going on here and I know it's a short story but there are a few holes that you could fill up ...

Hello! Wow oh wow I really loved this! You are an amazing writer, half-way through this I found myself with a frown on my face but not because I didn't ...

Hi there! So first of all I want to say well done on challenging yourself. I, for one, find it one of the hardest things in the world to write ...

Hello! I really liked this! You chose a specific style and language to use and you kept it throughout the story and I think that's actually really effective. I liked ...

Hi there! Just here dropping a quick comment since the reviewers below me certainly already covered everything. :D I wanted to say that I really loved your poem! I thought ...

Hi! Just dropping off here to say that I really liked your poem a lot! I love the message behind it and I think you carried it out excellently and ...

Hi! here for a review :) so I really like the idea from your story and somehow it reminded me of "Frozen". :) No, I didn't read it all because ...

Hello! Here for a review :) Firsty I'd like to say that I really did like your piece a lot. Your title drew me in, I don't know why I ...

Hi! I really liked your piece, it is beautifull written and the story was a pleasure to read. I also enjoyed your style of writing, it gave a different theme ...

Hi! Welcome to YWS :) I'm not used to reading let's say sort of horror short stories and I have to say I was really surprised as to how good ...

Hi! Here for an ultra-short review. I just want to start off by saying I really liked this piece, awesome idea and the imagery you create really makes it what ...

Hi! I thought this was a really sweet and original short piece, beautifully written. As AnimeGirl already said, my favourite lines were these: It was right above the silhouette of ...

Hi there I think to be your first short story it worked really well. The structure is perfect and it's just the right length. One thing about the dialogue: remember ...

Wow Love that last line, so unexpected :D Hats off to you *takes off invisible hat* So in summary, I think you are an exceptionally amazing writer. I do think ...