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stygianmoon17

stygianmoon17

  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Horror Re: No Witnesses, Pt. 2

    Wee I can't believe you made a part 2 !! When I reviewed the first part, it was a pretty old work, for YWS standards at least, and I just ...

    Mar 15, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: S.T.Z.A.H.S chap 3

    Hi there, I saw this work in the green room, but I seriously thought someone would've reviewed it before I found the courage to actually do something productive lol. I ...

    Mar 14, 2021
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: The Shadow

    Heyy, I know this is old by YWS standards, but I just felt like going through mystery stories rn, so here I am now. reviewing this work of yours. I'm ...

    Mar 14, 2021
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: The Pianist

    oooh horror I've been looking for a short horror story since a long time here :D It's a shame less and less people write horror on this site, it's one ...

    Mar 14, 2021
  • Art » Literature, Realistic Re: Empty

    Hey there, hope you're having a great day/night/evening/afternoon/.. Wow this is just.. mind blowing. There's such a flow of emotions, it starts off controlled and secured, then floods us until ...

    Mar 14, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, General Re: Cortez Shivick(Chapter 7)

    Hey forever young, here for a review :D He finally got caught ! I missed a few chapters so I'm not sure if he deserves it, but from the way ...

    Mar 13, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: For all the times

    OH GOD I wasn't expecting such details xD Oh well I'm 14 and I guess you did warn us šŸ˜‚ This short was straight to the point, with some hints ...

    Mar 12, 2021
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: We are an Anthro

    Heyy stygianmoon17 here for a review :D I'm in a mood to analyse tiny details, so sorry if I seem harsh, I just feel like analysing everything lol So let's ...

    Mar 12, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 1- The Queen

    Heyy stygianmoon17 here for a review :D The biggest thing that bugged me about this, is how the Queen says "the light side annoys me or "the good side" etc. ...

    Mar 12, 2021
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Spiritual Re: Imaginary Friend

    Heyyy, stingy here for a review :D Hmm I read some of the comments, and you commented on a lot of place that there's a hidden meaning.. I love hidden ...

    Mar 11, 2021
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Horror Re: No Witnesses

    Oh god this was a hell of a ride. I was skimming through works, and everything just felt so simple. Most of what is published on this site is either ...

    Mar 11, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: The moon

    Hey there, stygianmoon17 here for a review :D You really chose a great object for a poem, the moon is a great motif with tons of themes tied to it ...

    Mar 11, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, General Re: Cortez Shivick(Chapter 2)

    Heyy, I'm finally gonna review this :D and thanks for tagging me btw Oh god this line: ā€œAhem. Ahemā€¦ā€ the sound came from the adjacent room. The couples went there ...

    Mar 7, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Health Re: Addiction

    Hey there, @stygianmoon17 here for a review :) You explore something really interesting about addictions.. is it all that bad..? Obviously, drugs and cigarettes and alcohol is bad for you, ...

    Mar 7, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Supernatural Re: Prologue - Hanako-San

    Ahhhhh yes ! Finally !! I've been waiting for years for a short with an urban legend :) And it's a Japanese one, gah they're the best ones. Just before ...

    Mar 7, 2021


The bigger the issue, the smaller you write. Remember that. You don’t write about the horrors of war. No. You write about a kid’s burnt socks lying on the road. You pick the smallest manageable part of the big thing, and you work off the resonance.
— Richard Price