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Re: No Witnesses, Pt. 2
Wee I can't believe you made a part 2 !! When I reviewed the first part, it was a pretty old work, for YWS standards at least, and I just ...
Mar 15, 2021 -
Re: S.T.Z.A.H.S chap 3
Hi there, I saw this work in the green room, but I seriously thought someone would've reviewed it before I found the courage to actually do something productive lol. I ...
Mar 14, 2021 -
Re: The Shadow
Heyy, I know this is old by YWS standards, but I just felt like going through mystery stories rn, so here I am now. reviewing this work of yours. I'm ...
Mar 14, 2021 -
Re: The Pianist
oooh horror I've been looking for a short horror story since a long time here :D It's a shame less and less people write horror on this site, it's one ...
Mar 14, 2021 -
Re: Empty
Hey there, hope you're having a great day/night/evening/afternoon/.. Wow this is just.. mind blowing. There's such a flow of emotions, it starts off controlled and secured, then floods us until ...
Mar 14, 2021 -
Re: Cortez Shivick(Chapter 7)
Hey forever young, here for a review :D He finally got caught ! I missed a few chapters so I'm not sure if he deserves it, but from the way ...
Mar 13, 2021 -
Re: For all the times
OH GOD I wasn't expecting such details xD Oh well I'm 14 and I guess you did warn us š This short was straight to the point, with some hints ...
Mar 12, 2021 -
Re: We are an Anthro
Heyy stygianmoon17 here for a review :D I'm in a mood to analyse tiny details, so sorry if I seem harsh, I just feel like analysing everything lol So let's ...
Mar 12, 2021 -
Re: Chapter 1- The Queen
Heyy stygianmoon17 here for a review :D The biggest thing that bugged me about this, is how the Queen says "the light side annoys me or "the good side" etc. ...
Mar 12, 2021 -
Re: Imaginary Friend
Heyyy, stingy here for a review :D Hmm I read some of the comments, and you commented on a lot of place that there's a hidden meaning.. I love hidden ...
Mar 11, 2021 -
Re: No Witnesses
Oh god this was a hell of a ride. I was skimming through works, and everything just felt so simple. Most of what is published on this site is either ...
Mar 11, 2021 -
Re: The moon
Hey there, stygianmoon17 here for a review :D You really chose a great object for a poem, the moon is a great motif with tons of themes tied to it ...
Mar 11, 2021 -
Re: Cortez Shivick(Chapter 2)
Heyy, I'm finally gonna review this :D and thanks for tagging me btw Oh god this line: āAhem. Ahemā¦ā the sound came from the adjacent room. The couples went there ...
Mar 7, 2021 -
Re: Addiction
Hey there, @stygianmoon17 here for a review :) You explore something really interesting about addictions.. is it all that bad..? Obviously, drugs and cigarettes and alcohol is bad for you, ...
Mar 7, 2021 -
Re: Prologue - Hanako-San
Ahhhhh yes ! Finally !! I've been waiting for years for a short with an urban legend :) And it's a Japanese one, gah they're the best ones. Just before ...
Mar 7, 2021
