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stygianmoon17

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: S.T.Z.A.H.S chap 3

    Hi there, I saw this work in the green room, but I seriously thought someone would've reviewed it before I found the courage to actually do something productive lol. I ...

    Mar 14, 2021
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: The Shadow

    Heyy, I know this is old by YWS standards, but I just felt like going through mystery stories rn, so here I am now. reviewing this work of yours. I'm ...

    Mar 14, 2021
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: The Pianist

    oooh horror I've been looking for a short horror story since a long time here :D It's a shame less and less people write horror on this site, it's one ...

    Mar 14, 2021
  • Art » Literature, Realistic Re: Empty

    Hey there, hope you're having a great day/night/evening/afternoon/.. Wow this is just.. mind blowing. There's such a flow of emotions, it starts off controlled and secured, then floods us until ...

    Mar 14, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, General Re: Cortez Shivick(Chapter 7)

    Hey forever young, here for a review :D He finally got caught ! I missed a few chapters so I'm not sure if he deserves it, but from the way ...

    Mar 13, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: For all the times

    OH GOD I wasn't expecting such details xD Oh well I'm 14 and I guess you did warn us šŸ˜‚ This short was straight to the point, with some hints ...

    Mar 12, 2021
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: We are an Anthro

    Heyy stygianmoon17 here for a review :D I'm in a mood to analyse tiny details, so sorry if I seem harsh, I just feel like analysing everything lol So let's ...

    Mar 12, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 1- The Queen

    Heyy stygianmoon17 here for a review :D The biggest thing that bugged me about this, is how the Queen says "the light side annoys me or "the good side" etc. ...

    Mar 12, 2021
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Spiritual Re: Imaginary Friend

    Heyyy, stingy here for a review :D Hmm I read some of the comments, and you commented on a lot of place that there's a hidden meaning.. I love hidden ...

    Mar 11, 2021
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Horror Re: No Witnesses

    Oh god this was a hell of a ride. I was skimming through works, and everything just felt so simple. Most of what is published on this site is either ...

    Mar 11, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: The moon

    Hey there, stygianmoon17 here for a review :D You really chose a great object for a poem, the moon is a great motif with tons of themes tied to it ...

    Mar 11, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, General Re: Cortez Shivick(Chapter 2)

    Heyy, I'm finally gonna review this :D and thanks for tagging me btw Oh god this line: ā€œAhem. Ahemā€¦ā€ the sound came from the adjacent room. The couples went there ...

    Mar 7, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Health Re: Addiction

    Hey there, @stygianmoon17 here for a review :) You explore something really interesting about addictions.. is it all that bad..? Obviously, drugs and cigarettes and alcohol is bad for you, ...

    Mar 7, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Supernatural Re: Prologue - Hanako-San

    Ahhhhh yes ! Finally !! I've been waiting for years for a short with an urban legend :) And it's a Japanese one, gah they're the best ones. Just before ...

    Mar 7, 2021
  • Short Story » Health, Spiritual Re: Light and nature

    Heyy there, stygianmoon17 here for a review :))) The imagery was great, and I love the way you put some things, like "It’s a mistake to think that you are ...

    Mar 6, 2021


To plant a garden is to believe in tomorrow.
— Audrey Hepburn