Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
First Impression: Okayyy...so this was quite a lot of fun to read...I really love the very simple concept and its just turned into a really sweet little story and I am all for that. Let's get into a bit more detail then.
Anyway let's get right to it,
I love my imaginary friend. He’s always there for me. He gives me advice, he is nice when I am feeling down, and when I am feeling guilty, or hurt, or sad, I ask him to hold my pain for me.
Okayy...pretty normal start for this story...I don't think its the most attention grabby of opening paragraphs but it is pretty interesting and does set up the rest of the story pretty nicely so I think that make for quite a neat opening.
I never take it back. He holds hundreds of injuries in his hands, and those hands are beginning to look a little beat up.
Some people say I am too old to have an imaginary friend.
Well...I think this is where we go from the normal stuff to the part where why this imaginary friend is unique here...I think...anyway...pretty nice transition there at any rate.
I tell them, I am 17! I’m still a child, and I’m supposed to give up my fantasies? Nonsense.
Besides, giving him up would mean I would have to take back all the damage I’ve done him over the years, and I don’t think I could bear that.
Oooh that's definitely a bit unique there. This should be quite interesting going forward.
They’re probably concerned because I talk to him. So now I just do it when I’m alone.
“I screwed up that guy’s order cause I was nervous. Please, do me a favor and take my nerves.”
And then it works.
Well...that seems both sad and also nice at the same time. Very interesting couple of paragraphs that you've got there.
I wonder sometimes if he’s real, if the calm I feel when taking orders at the drive through is more than just placebo coursing through my veins.
And his advice, how it pays out big time, it’s almost spooky.
Oooh spooky indeed, I'm loving this new direction its going in...looks like there's two ways this could end from here and I think I'd love both of those so I have high hopes for the end of this story.
And the way I feel sometimes, I feel so wanted and understood.
Is he just a complex? What I need most manifesting in an invisible form, a Freudian ghost?
Ghosts can definitely be helpful...trust me on that one.
I don’t know. I just know that I love talking to him and I wish I could be closer to him, to see his face.
I’m reading a book with him. It’s about everything from the creation of the world to the death of Peter. He seems to like it when I read, it feels like I’ve got a fluffy blanket on bare skin, but just on my heart. And I know it’s him because that’s how I feel when we chat sometimes.
This continues to get more and more intriguing with each paragraph.
Sometimes we offend each other. We don’t mean to, it just happens. But nothing is like when we’re together, so we always make up.
Weelll actually I’m beginning to fall for a girl, and it’s that that feels like nothing else. He approves. In fact, he practically sang Hey Jude for me, the 3-minute version of course. In reality, I think it’s a three way thing, his spirit and hers pouring the sweet nectar of true love into mine, and that’s part of why I think she’s so amazing.
Oooh...interesting touch to add there...I like it...
I hope she gets the chance to meet him. It would be a shame if she didn’t like him, or if she thinks I am crazy.
No matter what, he will always be my best friend.
Well that was not one of the ending I predicted this would have...interesting...but much like I hoped I do love this ending, maybe more than I would have liked the other two I was thinking so overall I think this is a really nice place to end it here.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
Overall: Overall I think this makes for a really fun story and I really enjoyed reading it. You've done a really good job here with it. Aaand that's all I've gotta say here.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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