stygianmoon17

Hey there, hope you're having a wonderful day :) Oh god this is so accurate, I never played hockey, but in soccer you'd literally get kicked in the face by ...

Hey there :) Now I haven't read the precedent chapters as I am an extremely lazy person, so I'll not talk too much about pace, and development of characters and ...

Hi there, stygianmoon17 here for a review :D Usually people say that a work is "old" so that people aren't too judgmental about it, since the author believes it's not ...

Hi there, thanks for tagging me, I was looking forwards to this release :D I felt like in this chapter, the plot is propelling itself at a faster pace. And ...

Hi there, stygianmoon17 here for a review :D This chapter was great in setting up the main quest, it was intriguing and gave a lot of information about each character, ...

Hey there, hope you're having a fantastic day :D This is a very powerful short story. I could feel the emotion behind everything, and there was this swelling of sadness ...

bootiful It's not too long, the sentences are short and to the point- just.. bootiful I do have to comment on one certain thing though, this: She sits there, Watching. ...

Hi there :D I really loved this short, but I have a few things to say about it. If it's a standalone chapter, you could've maybe developed the characters a ...

Hi there :D Quick typo or/and grammar mistakes list: They have come with there "with their" Pollution and machines There houses and roads again, "their houses" But now were are ...

Hi there :D Well that's one hell of a way to start a short story xD I want to write a bit of what I think about this short, having ...

Hey there, stygianmoon17 here for a review :D @NateAtNight, I didn't actually find the repetition of "now" you said in your comment, so it's probably not as terrible as you ...

Hey there, stygianmoon17 here for a review :D @nightshadow, I didn't actually find that many grammar mistakes. One or two typos, maybe two or three misspelled words, but that's it ...

Hey there, stygianmoon17 here for a review :D My little list of typos: He has chosen th path of a medicine cat. "A kit will be born that shall hold ...

Hey there, welcome back to YWS :D That's actually why every single poem I've written, even if it dates back to five years ago, I keep. I write them down ...

Heyyy stygianmoon17 here for a review :D Oh wow. I've never seen someone so perfectly describe what it's like to have so many things to say, but so little words ...