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Re: Mr. Wolf
Hey there Chewy Why do you put your initials on your work ? Just curious... I don't cause mine would be MM so it would look like I'm saying mmmm ...
May 30, 2013 -
Re: Love Part 1: The Peacock
Hey there Chewy Kat here to review for ya! I can't wait for the next part because this definatley leaves me hanging off a cliff wanting to read more! I ...
May 30, 2013 -
Re: Little Red Riding Hood ~A Children's Story?~
Hey there Writingwolf. Firts off, not really a "story" as much as this is an informative paper...Though I did like it when reguarding it as such. I especially liked the ...
May 30, 2013 -
Re: A Childhood Lover
Hey social suicide. This was really tragic and romantic . It really describes what happens when you "jump the gun" in a relationship. I did that and found out I ...
May 30, 2013 -
Re: Trouble
Oh mah gosh :'( ahh! I have had my heart broken three times and now I don't feel like I will ever date again! It sounds like one of those ...
May 28, 2013 -
Re: Falling Into Spring
" Crisp warmness, chilling coldness, crunching leaves, rebirth promised, beautiful darkness, long nights, short days, warm sweaters, golden haze, falling slowly, leaves piling, springs calling, cold n
May 28, 2013 -
Re: The Bullying Poem
Hey there and welcome to YWS! Kat here to review for ya! I actually read this from the review V down there because I easily get intimidated by big blocks ...
May 28, 2013 -
Re: He Pled Guilty
Hey there Social Suicide, long time no YWS XD Speakerskat here to review for ya! AMAZING! The meter was spot on and the rhyming was fantastic. like NoOne said, there ...
May 28, 2013 -
Re: Ignorance
Hey Sapi! I love how it was a really omnious and forboding (excuse spelling) theme throughout until the very deep and meloncoly ending..beautiful! however I feel you used unnessary words ...
May 28, 2013 -
Re: Little Wind-Roses
Hey Sapi, thought I'd review your work since you were so encouraging on review day! It wa a very cute poem! One definate chane I feel would make it better ...
May 28, 2013 -
Re: Being a Writer
Hey there Speakerskat here to review for ya! Loved the poem! My review ~Kat JK! Heres my real review I really did love this poem. I didnt read all the ...
May 28, 2013 -
Re: The Story Of An England Pencil
Hey there, Kat here to review! Black made some very good points here and really didn't leave much to write a review about. "Now im in the human hands All ...
May 28, 2013 -
Re: Bracelet Connextion
Hey there Kat here to review for ya :) Wow, can I just say this wa super romantic ! Though... I found it to be e little confusing and I ...
May 28, 2013 -
Re: Grad School Fool
Hello there Kat here to review for ya ;) First can I just say this was LAUGH OUT LOUD FUNNY! And so true XD though....Have I been to grad school..? ...
May 27, 2013 -
Re: This is War (rewrite)
Hey there Speakerskat here to review for ya! I liked the idea and imagrey it painted in my mind but I couldn't reallt put it to a tune because there ...
May 27, 2013
