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  • Poetry » Other, Narrative Re: Simple

    hello penandsword smile is here to review..... well . your poem was so beautiful , it flows realy good . i'll start of the good things : 1-, i think ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Oh Night

    hello , i'm smile and i'm here to review your work . ok , so your work was so interesting , it's a very good piece that attract me , ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, Romantic Re: In his eyes

    hello" ImChasingTheStars" , smile is here to review your work ;) well done ;) , that was an amazing poem , i'm speechless , it's just so simple but great ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dear Hearts & Broken Smiles

    hello ok , first i just wanna tell you that i liked the title of your work very much , for me it's super important , cause it's the only ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Cheers to friendship

    hello ;) first i just wanna tell you that i realy liked your poem , it's wonderful ,from all sides , i was reading it trying to find some mistakes ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: The Cold Truth

    hello ;) so first i liked the idea of your poem , to love someone who you never met , it's impressive . also the title is so attractive , ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: A Bouts Rimes Letter

    hello , smile is here to review your work ;) ok , so honestly i liked your poem so much , you wrote it from the deep of your heart ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Lyrics » Realistic, General Re: Bulls***

    hi there :) so , first i wanna say i liked your song , it flows very good , and written in a very unique way . first i'll start ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Ingrained stars

    hello there :-) so first i wanna say that this poem was so touchy , because you wrote it from the deep of your heart . i liked how you ...

    Dec 25, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: that boy

    hey there :-) first i wanna say hi and welcome to the site . now for the review , i want to say that i realy liked your poem , ...

    Dec 25, 2013
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, Science Fiction Re: Home, The Long Way Round

    hey there ;) ok , so your poem was great , it's well written . first i wanna say that i love the title of your work , it's mysterious. ...

    Dec 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Darkness without Light

    hello deanie , smile is here ..... so that was very nice work , it's so touchy and expressive . -i loved the description in this part : Those never ...

    Dec 23, 2013
  • Other » General, Other Re: Why Fear Is Worse Than Greed

    hey there , smile is here to review your work .... ok , so lets see , this was a very good piece , it's simple and unique . i ...

    Dec 23, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A New Style of Writing

    hi there :) so , first i wanna say that i really liked this poem , it flowed in a good way and i liked every part of it , ...

    Dec 23, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Rising Phoenix

    hey there well this was a very good work , the good things about it are the strong words , and i see that you have a rich vocabulary , ...

    Dec 21, 2013


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