Simple

hello penandsword smile is here to review.....

well . your poem was so beautiful , it flows realy good .

i'll start of the good things :

1-, i think it has a special thing , it's simple , and expressive .
2- it's also rhymy
3- the punktuation is good

now for the things i seggust to add

1- the imagery , i think it's an important thing when we talk about poetry .
2-a catchy parts , i think it's good to add an attractive beginning or end , or even both , that would make your poem strong .
3- description , and it comes with imagery .

but generaly it's good , so keep it up

smile

Ever since that first palindrome they have became popular. In my opinion, palindromes are interesting, as long as you get it right. If you really want to challenge yourself you can do a word palindrome. Kinda like

Cows and chickens
Eating seeds and haystacks
Is it madness?

-backwards-

Madness it is
Haystacks and seeds eating
Chickens and cows

Those are complexed. Great job on this one! (Btw: welcome to YWS)

~lost

Palindromes are obviously becoming a fad on YWS. I like this, the only nitpick I have is the third line "That with time, I could be more-" Try taking out the word "That" and when you read it forward and backward, it reads more smoothly. I liked this poem and the idea behind it. I understand the feelings of self doubt, I have self doubt and self esteem issues myself. The only other nitpick I have actually is the central idea. You contradict yourself in saying that you are simple but then towards the end (when you read it forwards) you say that your personality is perplexing and infuriating. So, try to make up your mind. Also, Please, capitalize the first letter in every line.

I hope this review helped, Keep writing

-Gravity