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  • Short Story » Horror, Other Re: Sister's Keeper

    hello sera omg , that was the most amazingly awesome short story i have ever read , honestly , the idea is so so interesting . first i wanna say ...

    Jan 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Outside My Window

    heyyy smile is here to review that was a very nice poem ,the title was so good too the rhythm was very good , every part flows good . the ...

    Jan 24, 2014
  • Lyrics » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Please

    hey there ossum :-) so ..this song is very touchy , it seems so personel , i liked every part of it . i wanna start with the beginning ''If ...

    Jan 15, 2014
  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: Eating - The Hidden Fatal Side

    hey there anshira so your poem is so great , it's deferent , interesting and unique . the idea of your work is not usual , and that's why i ...

    Jan 10, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: Gloom.

    hey dreamy the poem you wrote is very good , first the title was very " expressive " it presents the poem in a comprehensive way . second , the ...

    Jan 4, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Euphoric Writing

    helllo there your poem is so interesting and defferent , you have a special way of writing . i think that the starting of the poem is my favourite part ...

    Jan 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Life as it is

    hey there first i wanna say that i realy enjoyed reading your poem , it has a great idea .. so there are the things i liked about your poem ...

    Jan 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Fragile

    hey there this poem is so great , it's simple but so meaningful and expressive . i always try to write a short simple this one , but i found ...

    Jan 3, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Romantic Re: The Forgotten Smile

    hey krish well , i wanna say that i usualy don't review short stories , but your work is so attractive , especially the title ( maybe because it include ...

    Jan 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Change The World

    hello so to start i just wanna say that the title of your work is so attractive . i liked the idea of your poem , so interesting , and ...

    Jan 2, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Last Glimpse

    HEY KRISH your poem is so good , i love each part of it , it has a message , a very touchy one , the words are strong and ...

    Jan 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: The Broken Promise

    hi there so , first i wanna say that your work is amazing , it's touchy , meaningful. and that you should keep writing poems , cause you're good in ...

    Dec 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Checkmate

    hey there :-) :-) good job :-) :-) so that was so beautiful poem , it has a message ,it's simple. and unique . first i liked how you organised ...

    Dec 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: The King's Gambit

    hello the poem you wrote was super great and defferent , i liked how you combined two ideas , frienship and chess , that's genius and so unique . 1- ...

    Dec 29, 2013
  • Article / Essay » Culture, Realistic Re: Working from the Earth: Exploring Greek Identity

    hello i'm the first one who review your work , unless someone sneaks while i'm typing this . ok ,so i usualy don't review articles and stories , just poems ...

    Dec 29, 2013


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