Checkmate

Hey Gigi,
This a beautiful poem. Its so well written. I loved it a lot.
Its so simple but has such a deep meaning behind it.
Its short and simple. I loved the last stanza :
"The price was yet to pay,
I thought I decided my own fate.
I was the King of it all,
Until Karma said, "Checkmate."
Keep up the good work!

hey there
good job
so that was so beautiful poem , it has a message ,it's simple. and unique .
first i liked how you organised you poem , four lines in each part , it's nice
second , the starting was very strong and catchy ...

''I sold my honesty for lies,
And gave away modesty for pride.
Cruelty comes with a price,
But it's just fine 'cause murder's not a crime.

my favourite part is :

"Love is for the weak,
Faith is for the blind,
Hope is what I do not seek,
And humanity's lost in the bloodthirst.

it's was very meaningful and expressive .
so in general , i say i realy enjoyed reading your poem , keep up the good work
smile

Wooow Gigi
Such a powerful poem full of meanings!
I love the last line, the punch it gives to the poem is awesome.
Very professional. The words are just apt and the reader is all set to get the emotions right.
After reading this, you get into a completely dark mood, I hope you understood what I meant.

Well written!