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  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Life

    hello this poem is really good , it's simple but meaningful. positives simple words did the job , and were enough to make the reader get the poem . the ...

    Feb 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Angel of Stone

    hey there i'm thinking to call you mr deep from now on , cause your works are very deep and AMAZING so the whole poem is good and very organized ...

    Feb 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, Realistic Re: Omaha

    hey there this poem is very good , i think that the idea is interesting and deep.you just need some punctuation , also i think you should remove this "&" ...

    Feb 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: Story of A Life

    hey there timmijake , i'm here to review your amazing work first off , i just wanna say that i liked the idea of the poem it's very good and ...

    Feb 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: In this house

    hello there kristen so this is a very good poem that i really enjoyed reading .. i'll start with the idea which i found very interesting and full of emotions ...

    Feb 12, 2014
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: This is My Story

    hello there welcome to yws ... so this is a very good work that i enjoyed reading . first off , i'm confused about your work if it's poem or ...

    Feb 12, 2014
  • Short Story » Humor, Health Re: A Visit With An Alien

    well hellooo timmy , smiley is here for a simple review ok , so i alwasy focus on reviewing poems ...but i think i will review your story ... i ...

    Feb 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Rusted Hearts

    hello :) so i'm here again for a review :) i have almost the same notes that i said about the other poem ( Out of Water Experience ) but ...

    Jan 31, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Out of Water Experience

    helloooo let me say that this is a very interesting poem that i enjoyed reading . i liked the idea of the poem , the title and the words are ...

    Jan 31, 2014
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: that's enough

    hello diamond :) so , this is a very good piece , full of emotions and so catchy . i liked how you started this song , very expressive . ...

    Jan 31, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Sing for joy!

    hey there :) ok , i liked how positive and happy your poem is , and your words so simple but strong . also it's well organized , three lines ...

    Jan 31, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Lying Leaves

    that's a very good poem that i enjoyed reading , although i have some notes : 1-"twilit "i think it should be twilight . 2- "In days when the blue ...

    Jan 31, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: How Fast?

    hey there , here's a review for your work i'll start with the title , it is a very good title , meaningful and expressive . now for the things ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Satire Re: Death

    hey there so first , i wanna say that i enjoyed reading your poem very much , every part was so defferent and unique. let me start with the title ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Film, Literature Re: I the Artist

    hello so this is your review .. 1-the theme : so interesting and very unique. i liked the idea behind it , and how did you present it in an ...

    Jan 26, 2014


For in everything it is no easy task to find the middle ... anyone can get angry—that is easy—or give or spend money; but to do this to the right person, to the right extent, at the right time, with the right motive, and in the right way, that is not for everyone, nor is it easy; wherefore goodness is both rare and laudable and noble.
— Aristotle