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  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Life

    hello this poem is really good , it's simple but meaningful. positives simple words did the job , and were enough to make the reader get the poem . the ...

    Feb 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Angel of Stone

    hey there i'm thinking to call you mr deep from now on , cause your works are very deep and AMAZING so the whole poem is good and very organized ...

    Feb 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, Realistic Re: Omaha

    hey there this poem is very good , i think that the idea is interesting and deep.you just need some punctuation , also i think you should remove this "&" ...

    Feb 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: Story of A Life

    hey there timmijake , i'm here to review your amazing work first off , i just wanna say that i liked the idea of the poem it's very good and ...

    Feb 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: In this house

    hello there kristen so this is a very good poem that i really enjoyed reading .. i'll start with the idea which i found very interesting and full of emotions ...

    Feb 12, 2014
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: This is My Story

    hello there welcome to yws ... so this is a very good work that i enjoyed reading . first off , i'm confused about your work if it's poem or ...

    Feb 12, 2014
  • Short Story » Humor, Health Re: A Visit With An Alien

    well hellooo timmy , smiley is here for a simple review ok , so i alwasy focus on reviewing poems ...but i think i will review your story ... i ...

    Feb 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Rusted Hearts

    hello :) so i'm here again for a review :) i have almost the same notes that i said about the other poem ( Out of Water Experience ) but ...

    Jan 31, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Out of Water Experience

    helloooo let me say that this is a very interesting poem that i enjoyed reading . i liked the idea of the poem , the title and the words are ...

    Jan 31, 2014
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: that's enough

    hello diamond :) so , this is a very good piece , full of emotions and so catchy . i liked how you started this song , very expressive . ...

    Jan 31, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Sing for joy!

    hey there :) ok , i liked how positive and happy your poem is , and your words so simple but strong . also it's well organized , three lines ...

    Jan 31, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Lying Leaves

    that's a very good poem that i enjoyed reading , although i have some notes : 1-"twilit "i think it should be twilight . 2- "In days when the blue ...

    Jan 31, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: How Fast?

    hey there , here's a review for your work i'll start with the title , it is a very good title , meaningful and expressive . now for the things ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Satire Re: Death

    hey there so first , i wanna say that i enjoyed reading your poem very much , every part was so defferent and unique. let me start with the title ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Film, Literature Re: I the Artist

    hello so this is your review .. 1-the theme : so interesting and very unique. i liked the idea behind it , and how did you present it in an ...

    Jan 26, 2014


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