sinistercutlass

I love and admire this poem something fierce. You had me from "the sun". I loved the first two line breaks. Man, those were powerful. After seeing the critiques below ...

You've put forth an admirable effort here to describe the nitty-gritty physical experiences of decay along the path to death. I was struck by your description of the man's persistent ...

OK, first of all: this was FUNNY. You do deadpan absurdity flawlessly. Second of all: I was continually amused by, and interested in, the detail with which you invented each ...

This was well-crafted! I feel as though you really crawled inside the creep admirer's head and rendered her thoughts and feelings accurately, with sensitivity. Don't get me wrong; I despise ...

Please tell me English is your second language, because this is atrociously written. Nice idea - I love genies... and Halloween! - but see the review below my comment. If ...

Nice. I often have the urge to parody the self-indulgent conventions of a lot of emo/teen/angst poetry and literature. But then I stop myself, because I know my readers will ...

The house on Laurel Hill is a childhood home. It might not even be real... merely constructed from memories that become more cozy and more October-tinted every year. But it's ...

I'm quite confused. What happened to this person? Did he/she get mugged? Not knowing what happened to him/her does diminish my feeling for him/her. Not going to lie. It sounds ...

What a great way to end the first stanza: "Damn fine day to be dead, huh?" I love this guy's f&*k-all attitude (sorry; I don't know if this review editor ...

.....what? Just.... what? ;) Kidding. You really meant it, didn't you, when you said you were bored and avoiding your other works? Well, it's cute and silly; I'll give you ...

Well, this was definitely horrifying. What made it all the worse than just straightforward body-horror was the calm and sense of purpose exuding from Cardigan. He did seem to change ...

Your text has a lulling, fairytale storybook kind of rhythm to it, which I really like. It suits the lost, found, and waiting-to-be-found theme quite well. Am I interpreting the ...

First of all, I'm no poet, and most of the time, I don't understand the structure of a poem, or why it works the way it does. I do, however, ...

Interesting.... so what I'm taking away from this is, the person who love the speaker and who smiled with teeth so bold, was "more bark than bite". She/he was more ...

Is this about the voyage of the Titanic? I like the idea of telling the story from the perspective of a young woman. About how old is Helen? By the ...