What a great way to end the first stanza: "Damn fine day to be dead, huh?"
I love this guy's f&*k-all attitude (sorry; I don't know if this review editor thing has a censor or not... ironic, given the point I'm trying to express). Even if the group of people with such attitude includes the nasty Donald Trump, I still find literary characters like this compelling.
His attitude acquires a layer of poignance when it's revealed that he's suffered house foreclosure. A very current, very pervasive 21st century fear.
The way I understand it, the worst possible has happened to this character, and he's not interested in keeping up the pretenses any longer. There's a kind of joy and relief in that shucking off of responsibility, and you expressed that well.
My favorite lines come in the last stanza: "Yes, the sky's never been so blue, and I've never had so much joy before." Though he's lost ownership of his house, I feel he's got a new lease on life, in a sense.
Haunting work. Well done.
Points: 370
Reviews: 30
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