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Re: sunshine
HEY nykolasandrews, I love how you take a visual approach to describe emotions that are often invisible. People are generally reluctant to feel publicly which is strange because emotions are ...
Jun 4, 2020 -
Re: Stolen things
HEY ChrisDixon I love this poem about the loss of time. When we grow up we have to lose the past that made us who we are it's a time ...
Jun 4, 2020 -
Re: you started talking and i listened
hey, erilea I really like your poem here. I could feel the pain in these lines like it was my own. What I love about it is that both the ...
Apr 7, 2019 -
Re: The train station
Hey, 4revgreen I like how you have kept the story simple and sweet. it reminded me of stories of Malgudi days By R.K Narayan. what I loved about the story ...
Apr 7, 2019 -
Re: i do not like myself
Hey, concord, I really like your poem here. It captures emotions is a very true sense and it isn't overly dramatized, the poem is complete in itself and I enjoyed ...
Nov 20, 2018 -
Re: Poem by Roger McGough. The Sound Collector
hey,WriterSister33, I like the eerie atmosphere this poem creates and stays true to the beat it catches. I love the way it is nostalgic and yet the nostalgia is not ...
Nov 20, 2018 -
Re: Abort!
hey, thedairist , I really like the idea of this poem, it is very inclusive, and it says a lot without actually saying it which I think is the right ...
Nov 20, 2018 -
Re: What is this life ?
Hey, Swetachowdhury0 I like this poem, it is very simple and to the point. I like how it kind of encapsulates life in 14 lines. But I think that the ...
Jul 30, 2018 -
Re: anger
Hey, kate2020 Anger actually breaks down or dissolves a human being into a vindictive animal, and when we try and suppress it, it eats us even more voraciously. So anger ...
Jul 30, 2018 -
Re: Anxiety
hey, BiruKun this is a really relatable piece of work. All of us at some point in our lives go through these set of emotions. The feeling of anxiety is ...
Jul 30, 2018 -
Re: alleyway.
hey lilithyoung, Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem, I love the vivid imagination here. The poem in itself seems incomplete, it leaves you wanting a lot more from the two ...
Jul 29, 2018 -
Re: Dear Father
hey, magiccharm2002 This is a really nice poem. I like the way it depicts death, in a very calm and leisurely way. I am not familiar with the Christianity aspect ...
Jul 29, 2018 -
Re: my hurt is worth your happy.
Hey Annaclare, I really liked your poem here, its about one-sided love and how it impacts the lover physically and emotionally. I can relate to this as I have gone ...
May 21, 2018 -
Re: Sometimes but not always
hey 269609, this is a sad poem, i mean it really brings tears to my eyes and you are only 14 which is too young to be experiencing and processing ...
Mar 25, 2018 -
Re: Magical
hey Rascalover, i really like your poem here. it works on different levels as it is. it is very simple and sweet, and of course captivating. I just wanted to ...
Mar 25, 2018
