silvermoon17

I would like to rant on about your poem- with the imagery and style and personification and rhymes etc etc But.. I just can’t seem to make anything out of ...

Hello! It’s silver moon for a review! (Sorry :/ silvermoon is suuuch a bad name) the part where you say that this is a random sad poem, I think the ...

This poem hooked me until the end.. I love the rhythm, the rhymes the way you unfurled everything until the very end. THE message was clear until the end and ...

Simple and blunt and short and yet effective. When seen on upon the first time, this poem is kinda memorable because of the color palette. Not something you’d see everywhere... ...

It’s probably not your fault.. but gosh the police is horrible! The words look so blurry and bland and grey. It really gets you out of the whole point of ...

This is beautifuuuuul! As an introvert and extravert, I can say you explored both sides pretty well. But there’s just one thing that makes me tick.. first thing, introverts are ...

Heyaa myjaspercat! I have just a few things to say about your poem. First of all, i like the way you open up. It really hooks us in. So far ...

Heyaaa anu, so to begin.. Your blind eye- I think that even though your poems have a clear message behind each of them, you only go on about feelings; without ...

Again, I really appreciate the length of your poems. They are not short enough to be lame, and not long enough to be boring. Even though it’s probably not because ...

Hello JJ! First of all.. cHaNgE aVaTaR!! It literally bLoWs my MiNd Anyways.. I understand capitalism is an interesting subject.. but even though your ideas are kinda interesting, I think ...

Hey there, I have a few things to point out. First of all, I like how you directly open up with what we know. That means, the fact they’re the ...

I think this is a really fun thing to read, since we get an overview of the game’s friendships as well strong references to friendship in itself. Your short sentences ...

Let’s begin with the beginning; wind. So sure, you showed the flaky personality of wind, quite well actually; but problem is- your poem on wind is roomy he of description ...

I really like th whole idea. The files thing, the way you seem to have an evolution all throughout the poem, until finally saying you will change the world. The ...

I got the message.. but only after like.. seconds after..? I mean, I’m sure it’s a great poem and stuff, but.. the thing remains quite unclear. It’s cool since we ...