silverlady99

Hey! I really loved your poem. It's deep, it sends a powerful message. I really like how the poem starts and then how it builds, ending on a strong note. ...

Hey!... here for a review. I really liked all that you have written, and I can actually relate. (How awesome is THAT? xD ) The title was nice. It basically ...

Whoa! ... hey there, here for a review. Your poem is disturbing :D .. NO, I don't mean this in a bad way, what I mean here is that it ...

Hey!...now wait, lemme get something right... YOU DON'T DO POETRY??!?!... YOU ARE SO DAMN GOOD AT IT!!!! The title made me feel like it might just be another cliche poem ...

Hey!....here for a review. I think your poem was , overall, nice. It was sorta depressing, but nice all the same. I think that the way you started your poem, ...

Hey!... your poem made me go "DAYUMMM".. So, I loved it. I didn't really find any errors in your poem, grammatical or otherwise. The meter was consistent. "but if your ...

Hey! I think you poem was AMAZING... it was really emotional... sad, but touching. The flow of your poem was nice, punctuation was punctual, and well, I couldn't find any ...

HEY! ... you FINALLY published something! I'm SO proud of you gal!... and remember what I told you?...YOU ARE AMAZING :D I LOVED THIS was cute, was endearing and engaging... ...

Hey! ... I REALLY LIKED YOUR POEM!! :D Just one thing I'd like to point out. "Everyone was kind of her friend, Though only a few chosens hung out with ...

Hey ... here for a review... Um... The whole thing was nice but just a few errors that I'd like to point out here.. - "I feel like a burden ...

Hey ... so, yeah, it's me again :P So, I REALLY liked your poem. It's something that i can totally relate to. The theme wasn't something really different or unique, ...

Hey ... YOUR POEM IS MIND-BLOWING!! I LOVED IT! It was just so amazing, so heart-touching.. I mean, i totally agree that it's dark.... but it's the sort of dark ...

Hey! ...here to review your work... The whole thing was well presented.. just some punctuation errors I found at a few places. Example- "Every summer I go to camp and ...

WOW! Hey!... welcome to YWS!... I am a new member here myself :P But... WOW! THAT WAS AMAZING! I mean..you had me holding onto every word! It was like, you ...

Hey! ... so... yea, I'm here to review your work. But, it's sort of hard to find something that hasn't already been said before. Your poem is really powerful. I ...