shinobithief

First of all, this is a very cute and honest poem. Well, not exactly cute. Whatever. I love the overall set up of this poem. It's just so cool! How ...

Wow, @myjaspercat ! You are on a roll! Wasn't it just yesterday I saw something new from you, also? First of all, I must say I liked this poem better ...

Hello! First of all, I want to say I really like this poem. It was a little long for my taste, but that is just my opinion. The poem reminds ...

Hello! Here I am to review... Anyway, this is a pretty good poem. I like how you say "I miss the sound of careless" as apposed to 'carelessness', or any ...

I really admire this poem. The rhyme really helps make it flow. I do not believe that if you did this as a vignette it would had the same quality. ...

I really appreciate this piece. I don't commonly see pieces in the Green Room that categorized as other, so that might have been what made me click on it. But ...

This poem is really incredible. It's short and sweet, and it keeps to the point. Good job on that front. I really appreciated how you came back to the main ...

This poem is very nice. The format is cute, and I appreciate how you going back to "I love everything about.." The ending is marvelous. I believe that's what really ...

This story is very nice. I appreciate how you kept it short and sweet. Even though, now that it has that quality I'm not quite sure it fits in the ...

This story is very... Interesting. I've never read anything like it. The way you set this story up, with the italics being "past" or "real life" was a bit confusing, ...

This is really very humorous! I've read a few other poems of yours, and I find them all amusing. I must say, you have real talent. The ABCB pattern of ...

This poem is really short and rather cute! I just love it when stuff like this happens in real life, don't you? Anyways, as I said earlier, this is pretty ...

So. A poem that is short to the extreme. Good job. I really appreciate this poem. It is short and sweet, and I understand it. You just want to sit ...

I must be honest. I do not understand this poem. Still, I shall review it. The rhyme was nice, I appreciate seeing something that is not a free-verse poem for ...

Alright. I must admit, actually, I am openly telling you that this is a very deep and personal subject. Thank you for writing it. I believe the title was a ...