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I find this poem very interesting. I like the way it is written, actually, and the subject is intriguing to me as well. I like the imagery, but maybe you ...

Really good. I love all of the emotion, especially the last stanza. He left me such a wrack ; Lost and alone , I had fallen off track . Attempting ...

Well I find this story quite nice. I don't usually reviews short stories because they are still too long for my taste most of the times, but this is short ...

This poem made me smile. I like the rhyming, and the subject is good. This class is so boring, I think I might die ; This class is so boring, ...

Hey there. I like the way this poem sounded. It flowed well, and the imagery isn't not bad either. I gave him my life. He gave me his. It was ...

At first i did not know what this poem was about until near the end of it. But I think it was well put together, and I just love the ...

Well this was fun to read! Very interesting, is all I think I will say. Take it as you want it :) Hello! How are you? What's your name? I ...

The scariest thing I’ve ever done, is look at Justin Bieber. His face and voice and girlishness , Previous word was not a real word initiate a fever. His dance ...

I must be a rebel, because I have seen this title ever since it was first featured, but I never felt compelled to click it at all. This si my ...

Waaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh??????????????????? It has great expression, but... If I sound harsh, please, I apologize in advance. I have no idea what this poem is supposed to mean or anything. It is ...

Very nice poem! I just love the imagery, and great diction. You really captured the eagle's essence. There are only a few minor things: I gazed out of my window ...

Okay. I have never really read a poem like this before... I like the uniqueness of it all, but it is a bit confusing at times, and is a bit ...

One word - Amen. I loved this poem and it has feeling. You really like creating works on controversial topics... My only real critiques are that, since you are speaking ...

Okay, I like the feeling in this poem, because I can tell that ants make you upset. Maybe you could add more imagery than telling us actions. Ants They eat ...

I really like this poem. The diction is not ordinary, and there is feeling to it as well, which is good to have in any poem. The imagery is not ...