shiney1

Hey, shiney1 here :) I like this poem. It is short and sweet, but nonetheless interesting. And I like how, bit by bit, it revealed the point of view, instead ...

Hello, shiney1 here :) I like the subject of this poem, and it left me wondering and contemplating, which is a nice bonus for a poem. But this poem left ...

I love the theme and the imagery is fantastic. I felt it was a bit too short, but that is just me. I would capitalize "God" though. But the ending ...

I do understand this. I have to say, this is a bold and new take on this story...and I like that. I can understand those who don't know and understand ...

Hey, shiney1 here! I like this...piece. Not sure what it is. But I agree with most of it. This is indeed what the world is like to some people, people ...

**If I am missing something, please let me know :) This is not bad at all. It is pretty in-depth while not getting to into it that you can't change ...

Ooohh...This was interesting indeed! And it is actually short, which is part of the reason I like it. The ending was especially wonderful! And the imagery was very nice as ...

This was pretty interesting. Thank God it wasn't about dating and teenage love, because that gets annoying. I felt as though some of the sentences were too long, and you ...

Welcome to YWS! shiney1 here :) This is a pretty good poem. I like that it's not a depressing love poem that I see here so often DX Also, I ...

This poem is very good! I feel the hurt (but not how she feels, of course). The imagery is pretty good too. Nitpicks I'm not what you see, I'm not ...

Welcome to YWS! shiney1 here, and I'll review this for you. This is a very nice poem, and a good first impression of what you can do. I feel as ...

I like this. It is a simple poem, easy to understand, yet holds a lot of meaning. I feel that people who can write deep poetry without using all of ...

This is nice :) It's refreshing from the usual things people write on YWS, even in the religious category. Very original. I like the bit of history you put in ...

This is so sweet! It's original, and it flows well. The main thing that bothers me though is that it's a bit too informative to be a poem. Yes, poems ...

This is just wonderful. The imagery was very good, and the poem flowed pretty well in most places. Also, it had a lot of feeling, and I was hooked from ...